There is not necessarily anything terribly exciting in the first chapter yet it totally throws the reader of the trail of what is to come. As soon as the second chapter started in on the life of Gonzo and his new friend I thought "Well, this is nice. Gonzo must surely be important and we're going to get to know how they met and what is so important about him." Then as chapter after chapter goes on Harkaway is constantly throwing it out there for us to see with story after story of these two great friends who have been so tight for so long and so on.
I think by the time we get back to the fire we're ready for the story to pick back up but wait! There's like another two hundred pages left! Then the return to town and the stuff with Leah goes down and Gonzo shoots him and throws him out of the truck and it's like wtf???
I don't think the story would have worked if done chronologically without giving us something to chew on in the back of our minds while the back story was told. I think it worked well or at least served its purpose sufficiently. If we had started out with the second chapter instead after about a hundred pages I personally would have been wondering what the point of continuing on would be.
I think by the time we get back to the fire we're ready for the story to pick back up but wait! There's like another two hundred pages left! Then the return to town and the stuff with Leah goes down and Gonzo shoots him and throws him out of the truck and it's like wtf???
I don't think the story would have worked if done chronologically without giving us something to chew on in the back of our minds while the back story was told. I think it worked well or at least served its purpose sufficiently. If we had started out with the second chapter instead after about a hundred pages I personally would have been wondering what the point of continuing on would be.
You know, you are probably right. It is part of what helps cement the illusion.
*MySmiley*
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June Book Club: The Gone-Away World by Nick Harkaway
07/06/2010 06:09:34 PM
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What did you think? Love, hate, etc? *NM*
07/06/2010 06:10:02 PM
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No surprises here, I suppose.
07/06/2010 07:05:47 PM
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Neither. Good, but not that deep, and with some annoying things.
07/06/2010 10:29:18 PM
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Mostly regarding being tricked
08/06/2010 08:47:56 AM
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*lol* Don't give up on your thesis just yet.
08/06/2010 09:20:16 AM
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Re: I am linking to my review, because I am self-centred like that. But I am not a fan.
09/06/2010 11:47:16 AM
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Is it successful as a satire?
07/06/2010 06:11:11 PM
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Yes, as long as we are clear on one thing: that is not all it does.
07/06/2010 08:29:59 PM
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Partially.
08/06/2010 01:58:19 PM
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Re: Actually, the IMF loan thing worked better for me.
09/06/2010 11:50:36 AM
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But right up to the point where they're given one they don't want, and the interest thing, etc?
12/06/2010 01:21:11 PM
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Characters:
07/06/2010 06:12:29 PM
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One of my favourite things about this book. *spoilers* (do we need to mark spoilers here?)
07/06/2010 07:58:36 PM
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The BIG twist:
07/06/2010 06:13:38 PM
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Not such a surprise
07/06/2010 07:01:24 PM
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Apparently I was the only person who did not see it coming *spoilers*
07/06/2010 08:51:01 PM
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Re: I guessed it in the second chapter.
09/06/2010 12:00:49 PM
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I clearly need to reread Thief of Time.
13/06/2010 06:07:28 PM
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Re: Spoiler for Thief of Time :
14/06/2010 08:27:33 AM
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Ideas
07/06/2010 06:15:25 PM
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Re: Ideas
08/06/2010 12:41:31 PM
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Re: I agree with you, and I think it is one of the drawbacks of the novel.
09/06/2010 12:07:51 PM
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Re: I agree with you, and I think it is one of the drawbacks of the novel.
09/06/2010 06:26:20 PM
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Re: I think you tend to read something and then decide that it is not fit for the genre it is trying
10/06/2010 09:23:29 AM
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The New People
07/06/2010 07:32:46 PM
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I know how I would have reacted in real life
08/06/2010 01:20:04 PM
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Re: I would have been one of those awkward hypocrites who tried to be cool with it.
09/06/2010 12:11:51 PM
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The first chapter
07/06/2010 09:01:13 PM
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Favourite scenes
08/06/2010 01:31:57 PM
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Re: Ninjas vs. Pirates: Your inner geek votes for?
09/06/2010 12:05:22 PM
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Pirates. Everytime.
12/06/2010 01:29:01 PM
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Re: Pirates. Everytime.
15/06/2010 02:40:45 PM
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I don't consider the pirates thing to be a "pattern"
15/06/2010 02:52:46 PM
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Oh, but that is just the thing: it is.
15/06/2010 03:16:26 PM
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I suspect our differing opinions on what is and isn't a pattern might make this discussion fail.
17/06/2010 06:19:11 PM
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A question I had while reading the book - was this meant to be set in Britain, the US, or some mix?
13/06/2010 10:53:03 PM
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You've not got it quite right. We are able to distinguish between a truck and a lorry.
20/06/2010 11:09:51 PM
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The other people in the airfield pond
15/06/2010 03:04:01 PM
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They were scary.
17/06/2010 06:25:59 PM
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The use of tense
17/06/2010 03:55:01 PM
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This is a tendency I have noticed in a lot of contemporary literature
17/06/2010 08:54:55 PM
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