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The use of tense Mark Send a noteboard - 17/06/2010 03:55:01 PM
One thing which did irritate me was the use of tense in the book. The narrator should never have begun using the present tense until after his creation, yet it is used both in the first chapter and also at stages when describing the events on Piper 90.
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June Book Club: The Gone-Away World by Nick Harkaway Rebekah - 07/06/2010 06:09:34 PM 1363 Views
What did you think? Love, hate, etc? *NM* Rebekah - 07/06/2010 06:10:02 PM 461 Views
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No. You don't need to mark spoilers. *NM* Rebekah - 07/06/2010 08:55:03 PM 464 Views
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Re: Characters: Camilla - 15/06/2010 02:56:01 PM 786 Views
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Quite. They were all pretty much ciphers. *NM* Rebekah - 12/06/2010 01:26:13 PM 365 Views
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I clearly need to reread Thief of Time. Rebekah - 13/06/2010 06:07:28 PM 714 Views
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Hm. I vaguely remember that stuff. Rebekah - 14/06/2010 05:52:16 PM 765 Views
Re: Hm. I vaguely remember that stuff. Camilla - 15/06/2010 02:47:05 PM 848 Views
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Re: Ideas Rebekah - 08/06/2010 02:09:08 PM 837 Views
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My Take. everynametaken - 08/06/2010 05:27:32 AM 883 Views
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What I liked. Rebekah - 13/06/2010 06:14:40 PM 793 Views
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The other people in the airfield pond Camilla - 15/06/2010 03:04:01 PM 1061 Views
Re: The gasmasked person Mark - 17/06/2010 03:47:55 PM 874 Views
See, that was my first thought as well Camilla - 17/06/2010 04:11:45 PM 920 Views
They were scary. Rebekah - 17/06/2010 06:25:59 PM 821 Views
Re: They were scary. Camilla - 17/06/2010 09:12:54 PM 875 Views
Ah, well found. Rebekah - 17/06/2010 09:17:24 PM 755 Views
The use of tense Mark - 17/06/2010 03:55:01 PM 843 Views
This is a tendency I have noticed in a lot of contemporary literature Camilla - 17/06/2010 08:54:55 PM 1158 Views
I've noticed it once or twice Mark - 18/06/2010 10:13:18 AM 909 Views
Re: I've noticed it once or twice Camilla - 18/06/2010 10:16:58 AM 1197 Views
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