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Could use the critique sandwich. Panorphaeon Send a noteboard - 20/12/2009 06:13:31 PM
"Such-and-such is pretty good about the book, BUT it could use this-and-this. But then there's that-and-that, which is good."

it's kind of a funny concept to me, and probably comes off as a cop-out to most people, but really, in these kinds of situations, copping out is pretty much exactly what i want to do.

it's a problem if you can't come up with something even superficially good about the work.
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