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You know how, if you eat something really spicy, your taste buds get washed out and you can't taste? beetnemesis Send a noteboard - 08/09/2009 05:56:32 AM
That's just what happened to my sarcasm receptors.

Your heart is in the right place, though. I was a little bummed about the chapter, going as far to call it "anticlimactic."

Then I realized that it's the first chapter- it's not SUPPOSED to have a climax.
I amuse myself.
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You know how, if you eat something really spicy, your taste buds get washed out and you can't taste? - 08/09/2009 05:56:32 AM 601 Views
Not bad. Very thorough. *NM* - 08/09/2009 04:06:55 PM 203 Views

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