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Not really a mistake, I guess Deadsy Send a noteboard - 25/09/2010 09:45:54 PM
but it's a good place to put it so I never have to make a topic about it :)


He uses "froze" too much. That's the big flashing Vegas arrow for me that "RJ did not write this."


"She froze." "He froze."

Egwene froze about 20 times in TGS
This message last edited by Deadsy on 25/09/2010 at 09:46:37 PM
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mistakes sanderson makes that bug you Oberonus - 23/09/2010 05:38:52 PM 2029 Views
Please read the posting rules for ToM *NM* Sidious - 23/09/2010 05:41:12 PM 3895 Views
Bael mentioning the Aiel Waste; characters using words that are too sophisticated or techical Cannoli - 23/09/2010 06:11:34 PM 1243 Views
I completely agree... DomA - 23/09/2010 08:54:17 PM 1119 Views
Re: I completely agree... Cannoli - 24/09/2010 01:57:38 AM 1036 Views
Re: I completely agree... DomA - 24/09/2010 06:39:17 PM 976 Views
Oh, sh**, Moiraine! I never thought about that! The comments about her in tGS suggest you're right Cannoli - 26/09/2010 03:23:56 AM 1046 Views
The entire Graendal scene Marshall - 23/09/2010 06:27:03 PM 1163 Views
I think this is the type of info that RJ never got around to revealing. RugbyPlayingAshaman - 23/09/2010 08:46:51 PM 960 Views
Pretty much... DomA - 23/09/2010 09:16:26 PM 1103 Views
The writing in the Graendal scene surprised me Narg - 24/09/2010 12:20:50 AM 988 Views
Re: The writing in the Graendal scene surprised me DomA - 24/09/2010 06:03:17 PM 994 Views
Particularly the way he described sex. It reeked of Mormon discomfort with the topic. Cannoli - 24/09/2010 02:04:08 AM 1020 Views
Reeked? Great word. It seemed quite in line with RJ's own dealings with the topic. *NM* Narg - 24/09/2010 03:42:28 AM 433 Views
RJ had great sexual humor--he even went a little overboard sometimes IMO Marshall - 24/09/2010 11:28:25 PM 877 Views
Re: RJ had great sexual humor--he even went a little overboard sometimes IMO DomA - 25/09/2010 08:56:47 PM 902 Views
RJ said breasts all the time, but in a more clinical manner - folding arms under breasts, etc Cannoli - 26/09/2010 03:33:09 AM 1048 Views
This stuff is cracking me up. Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:48:56 AM 915 Views
Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? Cannoli - 24/09/2010 04:09:48 AM 953 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? DomA - 24/09/2010 05:36:23 PM 1087 Views
A lot of those are reasons why I always thought she was alive.. fionwe1987 - 24/09/2010 06:10:35 PM 1088 Views
Re: A lot of those are reasons why I always thought she was alive.. DomA - 24/09/2010 07:54:54 PM 955 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? Sidious - 25/09/2010 10:02:02 AM 847 Views
hmm Marshall - 25/09/2010 02:43:09 PM 898 Views
How she knows its Balefire.. fionwe1987 - 25/09/2010 02:54:58 PM 847 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? DomA - 25/09/2010 08:30:59 PM 908 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? DomA - 25/09/2010 08:48:05 PM 939 Views
Some things... fionwe1987 - 25/09/2010 09:02:26 PM 854 Views
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Not really a mistake, I guess Deadsy - 25/09/2010 09:45:54 PM 872 Views
Well... Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:30:54 AM 966 Views
Thanks. I think I didn't notice it with RJ because Deadsy - 26/09/2010 06:35:47 AM 863 Views
Re: Thanks. I think I didn't notice it with RJ because Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:51:07 AM 874 Views
You're welcome *NM* Deadsy - 26/09/2010 07:17:36 AM 411 Views
Well... Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 07:37:39 AM 968 Views
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