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Re: I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM Dar Valon Send a noteboard - 10/01/2011 04:46:13 AM
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Very nice! I totally enjoyed that, and hope the next book is as good. There several places that could use fleshing out even more, such as the escape at the end, but on the whole I felt it was extremely well written.
You're writing skills are just too good for working on someone else's world. May I suggest you write your own story? I will be one of the first to buy the book! (color me a new dedicated Deadsy fan!)

There are several places, typos mostly, that I felt needed fixing. I copied the text to a MS Word docx file and made several changes, all marked in blue. Send me (PM) an e-mail address if you want it for reference.
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I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM Deadsy - 10/01/2011 12:59:00 AM 3614 Views
oops *NM* Deadsy - 10/01/2011 12:59:29 AM 637 Views
Re: I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM Dar Valon - 10/01/2011 04:46:13 AM 1276 Views
done. Thanks a lot *NM* Deadsy - 10/01/2011 04:58:25 AM 584 Views
Isn't it nice when main characters actually talk to each other? *NM* beetnemesis - 10/01/2011 07:39:30 AM 671 Views
Yes, that was one of things I liked about ToM *NM* DrJacJacMcScrumptious - 10/01/2011 01:35:22 PM 595 Views
Re: I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM Sidious - 10/01/2011 11:01:21 AM 1307 Views
Agreed, reads much more like RJs style than BS's attempt *NM* Iceman - 10/01/2011 02:24:47 PM 537 Views
Quick, someone tell BJ about it, so he can do a better job on the next book .... Dar Valon - 10/01/2011 03:29:22 PM 1262 Views
Re: I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM TyrReborn - 10/01/2011 03:23:29 PM 1329 Views
I like fanfiction, and I liked your overall approach to the scene RugbyPlayingAshaman - 10/01/2011 04:31:00 PM 1284 Views
So YOU are the one at ff.net... Voscaia Sedai - 11/01/2011 09:24:15 AM 1277 Views
Wow, I've never read good fan fiction before, but that was GREAT! The Count - 10/01/2011 05:12:32 PM 1069 Views
Will you write part 2? *drools* *NM* Lohikaarme - 10/01/2011 07:18:02 PM 586 Views
Outstanding, you really must grace us with creations wholly yours. Joel - 11/01/2011 02:03:38 AM 1226 Views
You want MORE people bugging you to continue writing?? shaiel - 11/01/2011 03:01:08 AM 1230 Views
very nicely done! The Lelaine bit was an especially nice touch darius_sedai - 11/01/2011 09:37:29 PM 1216 Views
This is very good! A Deathwatch Guard - 12/01/2011 07:00:14 AM 1188 Views
He didn't go to her to deal with Caemlyn Deadsy - 12/01/2011 03:09:16 PM 1214 Views
Ah, okay A Deathwatch Guard - 12/01/2011 07:47:59 PM 986 Views
I'm looking at it again Deadsy - 13/01/2011 05:33:38 AM 1083 Views
You mean Gaidal Cain come out of his larval form? A Deathwatch Guard - 13/01/2011 07:02:50 AM 1010 Views
Very Nice! Let's hear some more... malekithe - 12/01/2011 07:07:16 AM 1036 Views
Wow. I nearly forgot I was reading Fan Fiction! There is one thing, whitestar101 - 12/01/2011 07:56:15 PM 1189 Views
Or perhaps he slept with clothes? Lohikaarme - 17/01/2011 01:45:35 PM 1086 Views
Oh wow! helly - 13/01/2011 05:23:53 AM 1059 Views
*NM* Darth_Katie - 23/01/2011 06:28:42 AM 566 Views
imho, I wish they'd chosen *you* to take over instead of BSand. It's not like he sucks, but I enjoy newyorkersedai - 02/02/2011 01:42:53 AM 990 Views
Bumping one last time. *NM* Deadsy - 17/01/2013 05:17:28 AM 552 Views
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