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Re: I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM Dar Valon Send a noteboard - 10/01/2011 04:46:13 AM
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Very nice! I totally enjoyed that, and hope the next book is as good. There several places that could use fleshing out even more, such as the escape at the end, but on the whole I felt it was extremely well written.
You're writing skills are just too good for working on someone else's world. May I suggest you write your own story? I will be one of the first to buy the book! (color me a new dedicated Deadsy fan!)

There are several places, typos mostly, that I felt needed fixing. I copied the text to a MS Word docx file and made several changes, all marked in blue. Send me (PM) an e-mail address if you want it for reference.
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I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM Deadsy - 10/01/2011 12:59:00 AM 3293 Views
oops *NM* Deadsy - 10/01/2011 12:59:29 AM 512 Views
Re: I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM Dar Valon - 10/01/2011 04:46:13 AM 1018 Views
done. Thanks a lot *NM* Deadsy - 10/01/2011 04:58:25 AM 462 Views
Isn't it nice when main characters actually talk to each other? *NM* beetnemesis - 10/01/2011 07:39:30 AM 543 Views
Yes, that was one of things I liked about ToM *NM* DrJacJacMcScrumptious - 10/01/2011 01:35:22 PM 452 Views
Re: I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM Sidious - 10/01/2011 11:01:21 AM 1028 Views
Agreed, reads much more like RJs style than BS's attempt *NM* Iceman - 10/01/2011 02:24:47 PM 416 Views
Quick, someone tell BJ about it, so he can do a better job on the next book .... Dar Valon - 10/01/2011 03:29:22 PM 986 Views
Re: I wrote a Fan Fiction that takes place directly after ToM TyrReborn - 10/01/2011 03:23:29 PM 1040 Views
I like fanfiction, and I liked your overall approach to the scene RugbyPlayingAshaman - 10/01/2011 04:31:00 PM 1038 Views
So YOU are the one at ff.net... Voscaia Sedai - 11/01/2011 09:24:15 AM 1021 Views
Wow, I've never read good fan fiction before, but that was GREAT! The Count - 10/01/2011 05:12:32 PM 822 Views
Will you write part 2? *drools* *NM* Lohikaarme - 10/01/2011 07:18:02 PM 468 Views
Outstanding, you really must grace us with creations wholly yours. Joel - 11/01/2011 02:03:38 AM 946 Views
You want MORE people bugging you to continue writing?? shaiel - 11/01/2011 03:01:08 AM 917 Views
very nicely done! The Lelaine bit was an especially nice touch darius_sedai - 11/01/2011 09:37:29 PM 942 Views
This is very good! A Deathwatch Guard - 12/01/2011 07:00:14 AM 911 Views
He didn't go to her to deal with Caemlyn Deadsy - 12/01/2011 03:09:16 PM 959 Views
Ah, okay A Deathwatch Guard - 12/01/2011 07:47:59 PM 747 Views
I'm looking at it again Deadsy - 13/01/2011 05:33:38 AM 831 Views
You mean Gaidal Cain come out of his larval form? A Deathwatch Guard - 13/01/2011 07:02:50 AM 772 Views
Very Nice! Let's hear some more... malekithe - 12/01/2011 07:07:16 AM 781 Views
Wow. I nearly forgot I was reading Fan Fiction! There is one thing, whitestar101 - 12/01/2011 07:56:15 PM 921 Views
Or perhaps he slept with clothes? Lohikaarme - 17/01/2011 01:45:35 PM 811 Views
Oh wow! helly - 13/01/2011 05:23:53 AM 783 Views
*NM* Darth_Katie - 23/01/2011 06:28:42 AM 436 Views
imho, I wish they'd chosen *you* to take over instead of BSand. It's not like he sucks, but I enjoy newyorkersedai - 02/02/2011 01:42:53 AM 730 Views
Bumping one last time. *NM* Deadsy - 17/01/2013 05:17:28 AM 359 Views
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