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I've never been done showering, just run out of hot water. Joel Send a noteboard - 28/11/2009 06:52:41 AM
anyway, i just thought i'd point out how sanderson seems to use "anyway" a little bit too much in this book. i mean, i can see if a character says it in dialogue, but i've seen too many narration lines start this way. anyway, just thought i'd make the observation

...anyway... (8

or so I'm told.... :P


anyway, i'm trying to make a point, stop raining on my parade...

anyway, you should not use my favorite pithy pet phrases against me anyway

anyway... :rolleyes:

You made it too deliciously irresistible. Er, the teasing, not the long showers (just to be clear. :<img class=' />) Sorry if it came off as a cheap shot, 'cos I was just having a little fun and meant no harm.

Also recall that until recently the same complaint was often made against Jordan for overuse of many phrases, some quite adroit when first observed. I'm less rather than more concerned by this because it's so eminently preferable to elegant variation (which Wikipedia says has been rechristened "inelegant variation" because the other adjective has lost a negative connotation it once possessed; I like it. ) We may not care for the feel of it, but it's unambiguous and doesn't leave us thinking he's referring to a dozen things just because he refers to the same thing by a dozen names in as many sentences just to avoid repetition. Indeed, parallel constructions are frequently valuable for just this reason.

In a twelve plus volume series with installments averaging well over 700 pages a certain amount of repetition is inevitable. Note that I don't feel obliged to speak of "redundancy" "recurrence" "recidivism" and the like just to prove my vocabulary (read: that thesauruses exist. ) Repetition is repetition and I'll call it such how ever many times required to discuss it.

Perhaps it's not quite the same, but a skirt smoothing mouse could starve on the difference while teaching a fish to fly (I've always liked that second example so much I occasionally use it also. )
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sanderson uses "anyway" way too much - 27/11/2009 12:01:03 AM 852 Views
People who live in glass houses take showers in the basement... - 27/11/2009 09:16:30 AM 500 Views
does this mean you're done with showering? i always suspected as much - 27/11/2009 06:58:59 PM 577 Views
I've never been done showering, just run out of hot water. - 28/11/2009 06:52:41 AM 532 Views
it's not just the repetition - 28/11/2009 07:42:26 AM 411 Views
To be fair, Sanderson isn't an industry giant. - 29/11/2009 11:01:33 AM 391 Views
And "one" *NM* - 27/11/2009 11:08:24 AM 185 Views
Anyway.. *NM* - 27/11/2009 12:13:55 PM 186 Views
I think there were to many italicized words - 27/11/2009 06:19:14 PM 502 Views
an author of his supposed talents should not write like a 15 year old - 27/11/2009 07:00:39 PM 439 Views
Re: an author of his supposed talents should not write like a 15 year old - 27/11/2009 08:53:02 PM 549 Views
i'm sure i could find a few if i tried... - 27/11/2009 10:13:49 PM 436 Views
The editors let Sanderson use it way too much. - 27/11/2009 09:58:15 PM 496 Views
I've Never Heard Jordan Criticize His Main Editor. - 28/11/2009 06:58:38 AM 671 Views
at least he didn't use the redundant "s" (anyways). *NM* - 28/11/2009 04:26:49 AM 188 Views
He did in one place. Hurin uses it. *NM* - 28/11/2009 08:05:28 AM 219 Views

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