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All it really needs is a very thorough edit, I have decided. Rebekah Send a noteboard - 10/10/2010 12:25:38 AM
The story is there, the neat ideas are there, the characters are pretty good. But there is too much guff.

Cut it down, fix the errors, and it would be very good.
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SURFACE DETAIL by Iain M. Banks - 02/10/2010 12:32:40 AM 4618 Views
That's a scary cover. - 02/10/2010 01:43:12 AM 813 Views
No! It is pretty! - 02/10/2010 10:28:05 AM 839 Views
Not saying its a BAD cover. - 02/10/2010 05:47:11 PM 819 Views
It sounds interesting - 02/10/2010 10:19:43 AM 1132 Views
Re: It sounds interesting - 02/10/2010 10:27:39 AM 825 Views
Banks seems to be better when writing shorter - 02/10/2010 02:43:22 PM 839 Views
Ah, I probably should read some of the others, then. - 02/10/2010 04:52:09 PM 971 Views
All it really needs is a very thorough edit, I have decided. - 10/10/2010 12:25:38 AM 810 Views

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