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His descriptions..... Brian Send a noteboard - 03/12/2010 04:40:46 PM
However, it does pick up speed. I'd keep reading, because once the war starts it's incredibly intense.

I've been searching for a way to describe what his descriptions feel like to me, and the best I've been able to come up with is....sterile. I'm not sure if it's just me not being used to his writing, the first chapter, or what, but his descriptions just don't seem quite "on" just yet to me. It's like the words all fit together and make sense, but something about them just isn't quite right.

Anyways, I'm going to stick with it and see what happens. Now that I know the beginning is just a little slow for people and it gets better later on I'm going to stick it out for a bit.
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The Gone Away World Brian - 03/12/2010 01:25:30 AM 865 Views
If you dislike his descriptions it may not be for you ironclad - 03/12/2010 11:05:56 AM 638 Views
His descriptions..... Brian - 03/12/2010 04:40:46 PM 749 Views
I found the first chapter hard going Camilla - 03/12/2010 12:22:01 PM 664 Views
That's what I was looking to hear Brian - 03/12/2010 04:32:55 PM 756 Views
The first few chapters aren't the best, but it hooked me in fairly quickly after that *NM* Stephen - 03/12/2010 04:52:41 PM 269 Views
It does get better. Danae al'Thor - 24/12/2010 10:39:11 PM 520 Views
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