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Re: like anyhting else if it is done right it can be good Dark Knight Send a noteboard - 24/02/2011 07:24:00 PM
But it is very tricky and if your fiend hasn't done a lot of writing it is better to avoid it. Like in art form some of the best work is done by breaking the rules but you have to have mastered the craft and really understand why the rules are there to pull it off.


True, but to me switching POVs back and forth frequently seems lazy and is often confusing. And its hard to get into the characters because you don't get a lot of time to enjoy them.
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Third person narrative question Dark Knight - 23/02/2011 08:21:01 PM 1058 Views
Re: Third person narrative question Callia - 24/02/2011 04:14:34 AM 808 Views
So it is focalised through different points of view Camilla - 24/02/2011 09:34:34 AM 867 Views
Re: So it is focalised through different points of view Dark Knight - 24/02/2011 02:30:17 PM 848 Views
It's sloppy. I can't imagine that the result is good. Aeryn - 24/02/2011 05:47:27 PM 795 Views
Agreed. Rebekah - 24/02/2011 05:51:17 PM 749 Views
I'm glad you two agree with me! Dark Knight - 24/02/2011 07:03:14 PM 752 Views
Re: So it is focalised through different points of view Camilla - 28/02/2011 11:04:38 AM 919 Views
like anyhting else if it is done right it can be good random thoughts - 24/02/2011 07:18:15 PM 772 Views
Re: like anyhting else if it is done right it can be good Dark Knight - 24/02/2011 07:24:00 PM 697 Views
GGK Comet Sedai - 25/02/2011 01:38:02 AM 936 Views
parts of Dune are written in this style aldapelan - 25/02/2011 03:25:38 PM 786 Views
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