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Luckily, most of the sections don't go much past a page Larry Send a noteboard - 10/08/2011 01:23:09 AM
A single sentence that can't fit on a page scares me a bit.


And after a while, the comma breaks read almost like functions, since so many clauses begin with I that it seems like there are more sentences than there truly are. But the punctuation does fit the breathless sense of rage and anguish present in many of the writings, so it does fit with the themes.
Illusions fall like the husk of a fruit, one after another, and the fruit is experience. - Narrator, Sylvie

Je suis méchant.
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This might be one of the coolest things I've seen/read this year - 10/08/2011 12:46:53 AM 771 Views
looks like it could be interesting I have to be honest - 10/08/2011 12:55:53 AM 494 Views
Luckily, most of the sections don't go much past a page - 10/08/2011 01:23:09 AM 458 Views
what I read was interesting just tiring *NM* - 10/08/2011 03:08:07 AM 185 Views
Something to read as the mood takes, I gather - 16/08/2011 02:55:50 PM 568 Views

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