Active Users:359 Time:03/05/2024 10:38:24 AM
Lynch can be such a tease. Nate Send a noteboard - 16/07/2013 04:35:51 PM

He gives us that awful cliffhanger ending to the first half of the book, and then he shifts to an entirely different scene and gives us Sofia and Dona Vorchenza (who is of course secretly the Spider) having tea in a tower, while we don't know if Locke is alive or dead (though we have to assume he's alive, since the book is named after him and there are still quite a few pages left).

This is where Locke's cleverness once again starts to come back to bite him. He had no way of knowing that the noble families had some inkling of how they might possibly get information to the Spider. Normally, as he told the Salvaras, he relies on his victims' embarrassment to keep them quiet, but the Salvaras haven't been embarrassed yet. They think that they're in on the game. So if they get into a conversation with someone who might also know something about that game, they have no reason to keep quiet. Add in Sofia's worries that something is off, and the gang is screwed. Well, they're screwed by the Falconer and the Grey King and Barsavi already, but now we know that when they get out of that, they'll be screwed by the Spider as well.

In Chapter 10, if I'm remembering these correctly, Jean and Bug rescue Locke from the cask of horse urine after fighting off large aquatic spiders, sent to kill them by the Falconer. Thankfully the Falconer is lazy. I mean, I assume the in-universe explanation is that he was needed by the Grey King and couldn't be spared to kill Jean and Bug himself, but we've seen his power. He could have gone down there and finished off both of them in about ten seconds flat, and been on his way. Never trust an aquatic spider to do a bondsmage's job, dude.

Also, I'm not sure how long Locke held his breath, but it felt like forever. Guy's got lungs of steel.

But I guess what the Falconer did with his time was to go to the hideout and kill Calo and Galdo, and then steal all their money. That was another shock, the first time. He sets a trap for Jean, just in case he survives the spiders, and leaves one guy to kill Bug. Why he never considered the idea that if Jean survived, Locke might survive too, I'm not certain. I guess he never counted on Locke's lungs of titanium. But leaving only one guy to kill Bug? Way too efficient, Falconer. Leave two, get the job done right.

Despite my jabs, this was a pretty compelling chapter, and by the end the gang has been decimated. I didn't expect this, given that the entire series is named after them. But three of our main characters are dead, and we're left with Locke and Jean. Defeated, broke, half-dead, alone. No resources, no money, and precious few connections. They burn the elderglass cellar behind them.

Shit just got real. From here onward is easily my favourite part of the book.

As an aside, I'm currently reading Red Seas Under Red Skies, the second book in the series. It's been interesting, because on my first readthrough I remember liking Lies more than Seas; but on this re-read, I'm actually finding it the other way around. Seas is holding up better to a re-read. I'm enjoying the prose and the plot more even though I know what's coming, whereas Lies has suffered a bit without the unexpectedness of the plot behind it. It's not what I was expecting from this reread, but it gives me hope for Republic of Thieves. Because while I used to think that Lynch had taken a step backward after the first book, now I'm starting to come around to the idea that he actually improved, even though I couldn't see it on a first read.

Warder to starry_nite

Chapterfish — Nate's Writing Blog
http://chapterfish.wordpress.com
This message last edited by Nate on 16/07/2013 at 10:35:18 PM
Reply to message
Reread: The Lies of Locke Lamora by Scott Lynch - 03/06/2013 10:07:06 AM 1176 Views
The Prologue - 03/06/2013 10:08:39 AM 800 Views
Re: The Prologue - 04/06/2013 09:09:56 PM 865 Views
Re: The Prologue - 10/06/2013 03:34:28 PM 816 Views
I'd forgotten most of this. - 10/06/2013 03:32:26 PM 651 Views
Chapters One and Two. - 10/06/2013 03:36:57 PM 643 Views
I was waiting for someone else to go first. - 13/06/2013 03:39:31 PM 735 Views
What do you mean by "lampshading"? - 18/06/2013 02:52:46 PM 693 Views
I will explain! It requires Chapter Three information. - 18/06/2013 03:55:55 PM 664 Views
Thanks; I'd never seen the term before. *NM* - 25/06/2013 04:57:47 PM 309 Views
Falling somewhat behind, but I'm still participating in this... - 02/07/2013 10:50:27 PM 1182 Views
Not as entranced as I thought I would be. - 18/06/2013 02:47:24 PM 633 Views
Re: Descriptions - 24/06/2013 05:00:34 PM 736 Views
Re: Descriptions - 25/06/2013 04:59:28 PM 674 Views
I'm inclined to agree with that assessment. - 02/07/2013 10:54:32 PM 773 Views
Chapters 3 and 4. - 18/06/2013 02:53:34 PM 653 Views
Initial thought: - 18/06/2013 02:55:52 PM 639 Views
This is another one with messed up timelines. - 24/06/2013 04:47:16 PM 2850 Views
Re: This is another one with messed up timelines. - 25/06/2013 05:01:35 PM 2489 Views
It's funny - your comment above had spoiled me so... - 08/08/2013 05:25:31 PM 753 Views
Re: Sabetha - 08/08/2013 05:42:18 PM 717 Views
The first part of the book is a little slow, I've decided. - 25/06/2013 05:05:45 PM 653 Views
It does really pick up, doesn't it? - 13/08/2013 10:37:26 PM 565 Views
Chapters 5 and 6. *NM* - 25/06/2013 05:06:10 PM 288 Views
Things really pick up now. - 28/06/2013 04:04:27 PM 690 Views
Re: Women (spoilers) - 01/07/2013 04:56:07 PM 675 Views
Re: Things really pick up now. - 13/08/2013 10:56:37 PM 722 Views
Chapters 7 and 8. - 10/07/2013 06:22:02 PM 722 Views
Chapters 9 and 10. *NM* - 10/07/2013 06:22:22 PM 344 Views
Lynch can be such a tease. - 16/07/2013 04:35:51 PM 746 Views
I love Doña Vorchenza - 30/07/2013 02:28:30 PM 769 Views
Chapters 11 and 12. *NM* - 24/07/2013 06:34:25 PM 312 Views
Lynch is ruthless in these chapters. - 30/07/2013 02:40:19 PM 776 Views
Poor everyone. - 02/08/2013 11:04:34 PM 704 Views
Chapters 13 and 14. *NM* - 24/07/2013 06:34:41 PM 323 Views
These are very satisfying chapters, on the whole. - 30/07/2013 03:11:28 PM 715 Views
Chapters 15 and 16 and the epilogue. *NM* - 30/07/2013 02:09:39 PM 305 Views
Disappointing, on the whole, I felt. - 14/08/2013 09:25:31 PM 733 Views
I liked parts of it, but you make good points. - 15/08/2013 05:45:14 PM 824 Views
Yeah, I liked parts too - but still. - 15/08/2013 06:54:19 PM 657 Views
I enjoyed it enough to overlook any deficiencies, apparently. - 21/08/2013 08:09:54 PM 810 Views
Re: Disappointing, on the whole, I felt. - 22/09/2013 11:22:19 PM 760 Views
Oh my. - 23/09/2013 06:00:44 PM 641 Views
Re: Oh my. - 09/10/2013 10:12:55 PM 699 Views

Reply to Message