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The entire Graendal scene Marshall Send a noteboard - 23/09/2010 06:27:03 PM
I posted this before, but I'll post it again:

The more I read Sanderson, the more I miss RJ's subtlety that Sanderson just utterly, completely lacks. He's a fine writer; he's doing a great job keeping up with characters, interweaving plotlines, and keeping the story moving forward. But what he is not fine at is giving us information: RJ was a master of telling us what was REALLY going on without actually saying it. He wrote for the intelligent reader, and left it to us to piece together the motives and actions of the players. We had to play the Game of Houses, and it adds fun, appeal, and depth to the story.

After reading Graendal's POV, I felt like I was reading a Dan Brown novel. Every last detail about the scene that anyone had questioned was directly addressed. Graendal had thoughts that were not realistic--they only existed to provide us with direct information (i.e. the rats and ravens have to report to the DO; that the TP acts differently, etc.).

I've noticed this throughout TGS, and it's an issue that has been steadily building. I can't really blame BS too much, but I wish he would spend a bit more effort not treating us like high-school readers. I'm really not looking forward to the scene where Graendal is doing dishes and thinks, "The rag she used to wipe the silver goblet reminded her of the cloth Asmodean wore around his neck when she killed him, after having waited for fifteen minutes in the storage room and using a tweeter to track his position."
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mistakes sanderson makes that bug you - 23/09/2010 05:38:52 PM 1939 Views
Please read the posting rules for ToM *NM* - 23/09/2010 05:41:12 PM 3848 Views
Bael mentioning the Aiel Waste; characters using words that are too sophisticated or techical - 23/09/2010 06:11:34 PM 1149 Views
I completely agree... - 23/09/2010 08:54:17 PM 1007 Views
Re: I completely agree... - 24/09/2010 01:57:38 AM 931 Views
Re: I completely agree... - 24/09/2010 06:39:17 PM 883 Views
The entire Graendal scene - 23/09/2010 06:27:03 PM 1045 Views
I think this is the type of info that RJ never got around to revealing. - 23/09/2010 08:46:51 PM 892 Views
Pretty much... - 23/09/2010 09:16:26 PM 1010 Views
The writing in the Graendal scene surprised me - 24/09/2010 12:20:50 AM 906 Views
Re: The writing in the Graendal scene surprised me - 24/09/2010 06:03:17 PM 906 Views
Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? - 24/09/2010 04:09:48 AM 888 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? - 24/09/2010 05:36:23 PM 988 Views
A lot of those are reasons why I always thought she was alive.. - 24/09/2010 06:10:35 PM 1005 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? - 25/09/2010 10:02:02 AM 778 Views
hmm - 25/09/2010 02:43:09 PM 801 Views
How she knows its Balefire.. - 25/09/2010 02:54:58 PM 763 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? - 25/09/2010 08:30:59 PM 840 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? - 25/09/2010 08:48:05 PM 859 Views
Some things... - 25/09/2010 09:02:26 PM 767 Views
Speaking of Kerb - 25/09/2010 09:39:46 PM 759 Views
Mat - 24/09/2010 04:44:34 AM 810 Views
Not really a mistake, I guess - 25/09/2010 09:45:54 PM 784 Views
Well... - 26/09/2010 06:30:54 AM 887 Views
Thanks. I think I didn't notice it with RJ because - 26/09/2010 06:35:47 AM 778 Views
Re: Thanks. I think I didn't notice it with RJ because - 26/09/2010 06:51:07 AM 787 Views
You're welcome *NM* - 26/09/2010 07:17:36 AM 361 Views
Well... - 26/09/2010 07:37:39 AM 886 Views

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