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Huh? Lord Haart Send a noteboard - 23/01/2011 11:51:02 PM
But really, I'm astounded by how bald his writing is. One thing I get annoyed by is when people use "like" instead of "is." "It's like I've been betrayed" is a dumb thing to say if your spouse cheats on you. You've been betrayed. There's no "like" there.

Sanderson, my first real taste of his writing, comes off as someone who drops comparisons every single time, even when a simile or metaphor might actually be the way to go. We don't understand that someone feels like an insect that's just broken through its shell to discover that it and its place in the world is new. Sanderson just writes "He looked around him and he discovered that he was different and his place in the world also was."


Wow, way to argue that a writer uses too much simile and should be more direct, and then in the very next paragraph berate him for being direct.
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Just read ToM: Sanderson doesn't know High Chant, only common - 23/01/2011 08:03:17 PM 1718 Views
As someone who's broadly anti-Sanderson - 23/01/2011 08:53:52 PM 1133 Views
LoL - that discredits greatly the main post *NM* - 24/01/2011 04:27:45 PM 342 Views
No, it doesn't. It "discredits greatly" one of his points, not the main argument. *NM* *NM* - 24/01/2011 06:57:38 PM 345 Views
Disagree... - 25/01/2011 12:36:25 AM 730 Views
yep *NM* - 25/01/2011 10:44:04 AM 304 Views
Or it could be that I read every book 5 times, but like 10 years ago - 26/01/2011 05:35:46 AM 624 Views
Huh? - 23/01/2011 11:51:02 PM 834 Views
No, the "misused simile" thing is just a pet peeve - 24/01/2011 12:47:04 AM 864 Views
Re: No, the "misused simile" thing is just a pet peeve - 24/01/2011 09:34:03 AM 939 Views
Is that really the case? A lot was cut from ToM? *NM* - 24/01/2011 11:16:05 PM 288 Views
Sweated is a word. *NM* - 24/01/2011 02:45:57 AM 344 Views
Is it? Would you ever write "I had sweated" or "having sweated for an hour?" *NM* - 24/01/2011 11:17:04 PM 318 Views
No, because it is not a participle. - 24/01/2011 11:36:12 PM 730 Views
Sure it is - 25/01/2011 11:31:29 AM 759 Views
No. I have written: I sweated a lot when I was in India. *NM* - 25/01/2011 12:16:39 AM 337 Views
Um, yes,. sweated is the past tense of to sweat. *NM* - 07/02/2011 03:37:58 AM 364 Views
Re: Just read ToM: Sanderson doesn't know High Chant, only common - 25/01/2011 11:06:24 PM 743 Views
Meh. I see no problem with this example. - 26/01/2011 07:10:53 AM 682 Views
If you hate his writing so much then don't read the final book. *NM* - 07/02/2011 03:39:43 AM 430 Views
I was kind of thinking this myself - 13/02/2011 10:50:07 AM 673 Views

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