Well, it reads much like contemporary American English in its social registers and use of verbs as nouns and vice versa. Doesn't make it good, but it does seem to appeal to those who speak in a similar fashion.
It's way too "modern" and colloquial for most Fantasy. It's one aspect of secondary worlds Sanderson still has a great deal to learn about.
This is really the main thing about Sanderson's writing that bugs me. His writing has a certain "modern" informality and levity to it that sometimes doesn't match up well with RJ's writing, and it can occasionally stick out like a sore thumb. But it also feels wrong for fantasy. Fantasy is a genre where it seems to be tricky to get the writing just right, colloquial writing always feels off, but I've read stuff that had archaisms that were used poorly and dragged down the work as well (this includes some of the early Conan stuff RJ wrote, but he at least developed a good style by the time he got around to WoT).
I don't let it get to me too much. I've seen the RJ = Plain Chant, BS = Common cracks, while they're occasionally funny, I don't like to bash BS too much. Whether BS is bad writer or not, RJ spent more than 20 years of his life on the work, and knew what he was doing with it. BS doesn't know RJ's world that well, nor would I ever expect him or really any one else to. I can accept the mistakes.
Where to begin....
- 23/01/2013 05:22:12 AM
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- 23/01/2013 01:18:31 PM
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I think Rand and Moridin sword fought because channeling at SG is v dangerous so they minimised it
- 24/01/2013 12:40:45 AM
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Re: Where to begin....
- 23/01/2013 04:11:13 PM
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There was a HUGE goldmine of complexity that RJ planted in the story that BS just completely ignored *NM*
- 23/01/2013 06:35:17 PM
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Seriously, the entire book I was scratching my head wondering why the hell the Channelers
- 25/01/2013 06:32:26 AM
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Hey John
- 24/01/2013 04:04:39 PM
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Re: Hey John
- 24/01/2013 05:45:30 PM
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Yeah, his writing annoys me greatly at times
- 24/01/2013 06:57:50 PM
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- 25/01/2013 04:55:54 AM
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I'm as much of a "mainstream" reviewer as a fantasy one these days, so...
- 25/01/2013 05:16:16 AM
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- 25/01/2013 05:16:16 AM
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- 25/01/2013 08:37:48 PM
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- 25/01/2013 08:37:48 PM
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All but remains, for me at least, is a story that isn't as memorable as it could have been
- 27/01/2013 03:03:59 AM
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- 28/01/2013 09:26:24 PM
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Re: Yeah, his writing annoys me greatly at times
- 10/02/2013 08:10:35 AM
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Perrin growled. Slayer was too quick! Perrin was fast, too. Sooner or later, one of them would..." *NM*
- 24/01/2013 08:23:12 PM
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At one point he used the word "arabesque" - how can something be that without Arabic culture? *NM*
- 24/01/2013 09:25:54 PM
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Indeed...
- 25/01/2013 03:14:22 AM
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He actually said he took "many advanced courses in linguistics"? That makes it even worse.
- 25/01/2013 02:19:31 PM
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Re: He actually said he took "many advanced courses in linguistics"? That makes it even worse.
- 25/01/2013 08:53:38 PM
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Well, Brigham Young is the *best* Mormon university out there.
- 26/01/2013 01:37:16 AM
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- 26/01/2013 03:20:09 PM
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You still Trolling the WoTBoards Larry?
- 24/01/2013 11:06:14 PM
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- 24/01/2013 11:06:14 PM
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Ha! I've mellowed a bit, though!
- 25/01/2013 04:56:47 AM
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- 25/01/2013 04:56:47 AM
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Been there
- 26/01/2013 09:27:10 PM
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I went to the World's Fair in 1982 with my family - again, small world!
- 27/01/2013 03:08:27 AM
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- 27/01/2013 03:08:27 AM
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Were you the one who came up with "Selene was Mesaana"?
- 25/01/2013 07:44:01 AM
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