Saying there was a "lack of analysis... [and] sophistication" really isn't helpful in the slightest. Saying "I think you overlooked X, Y, or Z" would be constructive.
Perhaps this weekend, when I have more than a few minutes at a time to devote to matters. I have indeed possibilities I could say there.
Illusions fall like the husk of a fruit, one after another, and the fruit is experience. - Narrator, Sylvie
Je suis méchant.
Je suis méchant.
Who Fears Death by Nnedi Okorafor (here be spoilers)
- 26/10/2010 08:00:49 PM
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What a terrible review
- 26/10/2010 11:52:25 PM
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He voiced his opinions. Everyone does reviews differently.
- 27/10/2010 05:32:27 PM
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Yes, really
- 27/10/2010 05:45:01 PM
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You're acting in a totally uncalled for manner. His reviews don't need to meet your specifications.
- 28/10/2010 03:54:31 AM
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His reviews don't need to meet Larry's specifications, but Larry is also entitled to his opinion.
- 28/10/2010 04:21:57 AM
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Yes, but then we get into the endless "well you can have an opinion, but I get one too."
- 28/10/2010 04:34:36 AM
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So how exactly does one raise a valid concern that a review reads like a bad 5th grade book report?
- 28/10/2010 04:56:42 AM
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The way Legolas suggested?
- 28/10/2010 05:57:46 AM
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You want me to do that?
- 28/10/2010 10:09:27 PM
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Jesus. Relax, would you
- 27/10/2010 06:16:15 PM
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I haven't read the book so can't judge all that well, but I've seen far worse reviews here. 
- 27/10/2010 06:59:25 PM
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- 27/10/2010 06:59:25 PM
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I'd be scared to think there are those that are much worse. Is functional illiteracy that bad? 
- 27/10/2010 10:51:32 PM
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- 27/10/2010 10:51:32 PM
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Has it ever occurred to you that it is a metaphor, rather than an alternate reality?
- 28/10/2010 04:20:26 AM
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