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what he said LadyLorraine Send a noteboard - 20/12/2009 06:09:33 PM
your friend deserves your honesty. But you totally don't have to phrase it like "it sucks". Constructive criticism, pointing out exactly how he could improve the writing, is the best plan.

If he has a good story and it's worth telling, then there's no reason why he shouldn't be able to work on it to make it worth telling Besides, first drafts are rarely that lovely
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I would like some opinions, please... damookster - 20/12/2009 03:31:49 PM 720 Views
Well, you could.... jh - 20/12/2009 03:52:25 PM 465 Views
Maybe I'm a coward Sareitha Sedai - 20/12/2009 03:57:16 PM 528 Views
kind of like... damookster - 20/12/2009 04:02:25 PM 471 Views
Well Sareitha Sedai - 20/12/2009 04:15:04 PM 537 Views
Be up front with him. Animosity - 20/12/2009 04:13:52 PM 443 Views
I wouldn't tell him it sucks. Mats Gambling Buddy - 20/12/2009 04:14:10 PM 443 Views
Ask him if he wants honesty. The Shrike - 20/12/2009 05:49:49 PM 470 Views
what he said LadyLorraine - 20/12/2009 06:09:33 PM 430 Views
Ah, see.... Camilla - 20/12/2009 06:24:53 PM 459 Views
Who says "no" when you say "do you want me to be honest?" mook isn't an editor, here beetnemesis - 20/12/2009 08:03:02 PM 462 Views
Bullshit. The Shrike - 20/12/2009 08:12:16 PM 447 Views
I didn't object to criticism beetnemesis - 20/12/2009 10:30:39 PM 513 Views
This. Craig - 20/12/2009 10:45:40 PM 437 Views
Tell him that you want to see him succeed as a writer and then... MightyYT - 20/12/2009 06:06:47 PM 400 Views
Could use the critique sandwich. Panorphaeon - 20/12/2009 06:13:31 PM 443 Views
Or just tell him it sucks, then give him an actual sandwich. jiggy - 21/12/2009 10:34:03 AM 457 Views
Perhaps tell him the story has good bones, and you look forward to seeing a future draft. Erith - 20/12/2009 06:56:06 PM 600 Views
Do what my husband did with me. Tashmere - 20/12/2009 08:11:33 PM 477 Views
In general, I agree with the sandwich method, but... Avendesora - 21/12/2009 05:36:54 PM 452 Views
I like your answer. *NM* Tashmere - 22/12/2009 03:25:33 AM 180 Views
My friend, you don't tell him that. Jacob - 22/12/2009 06:41:03 PM 492 Views
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