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Ouch.... DomA Send a noteboard - 27/07/2010 05:48:13 AM
There is also this tweet from BS which I missed until I saw it posted on dragonmount:

"8% cut from Chapter 80. In other news, the chapters have numbers now. 94 chapters in the book plus a multi-scene epilogue."

Fun, Fun.



I didn't really calculate with expected word counts, but just like that it sounds like way too many chapters for a WOT book of the planned length (eg: 55 only for LOC, 58 for TSR, 50 for TGS). Shortening the chapters too much would definitely change the style of WOT.

It sounds like the trend already a bit present in TGS of writing too short scenes for a WOT book (Brandon had a hard time achieving as much in a single long scene/POV as RJ used to, and chopped things in multiple short scenes scattered in different chapters, occasionally with some redundant elements in them - Aviendha's chapters felt like that in TGS. RJ would have made that two longer POVs with her, no more) and switching POV too often is gonna get a bit worse in TOM.

It's not really a good news, I think (hard to tell before reading the thing, though). It's the one aspects of TGS I was the most critical of (one of the very few aspects that actually was detrimental for real to my enjoyement and that didn't feel WOT enough to my taste, the other was the poor care taken to situate us clearly on the timeline along the book, the way Jordan did).

Oh well... hopefully Brandon has not KevinAndersonized the book too much (too short chapters, too short scenes that feel like you're reading a screenplay more than a book... Brandon's (avowed)problem with including the side characters was in part due to that.. he focussed the scenes so much, the scenes which RJ would have made longer with side stuff, taking the opportunity to make the side characters appear briefly in them and their storylines progress by short bit and pieces). He tends to have that flaw a bit in his own books, the earlier ones anyway (those almost dialogue only scenes and single purpose scenes...). There's not something inherently wrong with that, but it's never been the style of WOT.
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tGS: Chapter 81 comment from BS (*spoilers*?) - 27/07/2010 03:57:34 AM 2151 Views
Yeah, I saw that. - 27/07/2010 04:03:34 AM 1258 Views
Well I don't think it was too big of a scene or RJ would have written it I think. - 27/07/2010 04:11:01 AM 1127 Views
Re: Well I don't think it was too big of a scene or RJ would have written it I think. - 27/07/2010 05:17:22 AM 1082 Views
Re: Well I don't think it was too big of a scene or RJ would have written it I think. - 27/07/2010 09:18:54 AM 977 Views
Yeah, BS said on Twitter... - 27/07/2010 09:47:41 AM 1148 Views
Again! - 27/07/2010 11:41:33 PM 1087 Views
Re: Yeah, I saw that. - 27/07/2010 05:28:53 AM 1073 Views
Yeah, I wondered about that... - 27/07/2010 05:02:27 PM 953 Views
Re: Yeah, I wondered about that... - 28/07/2010 04:04:06 AM 890 Views
... and 94 chapters - 27/07/2010 04:04:51 AM 1099 Views
Thats a lot of chapters *NM* - 27/07/2010 05:16:35 AM 451 Views
Ouch.... - 27/07/2010 05:48:13 AM 1124 Views
BS twittered then, though... - 27/07/2010 08:15:06 AM 1045 Views
Re: BS twittered then, though... - 27/07/2010 05:20:56 PM 953 Views
Re: BS twittered then, though... - 28/07/2010 12:01:26 AM 1036 Views
Don't you mean aMoL: Ch 81? - 27/07/2010 08:38:30 PM 973 Views
The next book, Towers of Midnight, is meant. *NM* - 27/07/2010 10:24:43 PM 453 Views
Re: The next book, Towers of Midnight, is meant. - 27/07/2010 11:28:51 PM 928 Views
Now he said... - 28/07/2010 08:32:17 AM 1038 Views
rock on *NM* - 27/07/2010 04:05:48 AM 423 Views
Hmm, Lan's death? - 27/07/2010 08:09:25 AM 999 Views
sure, why not. my only problem is... - 27/07/2010 08:58:06 AM 999 Views
I hope you are right. - 27/07/2010 09:19:44 AM 1004 Views
I don't think he will die - 27/07/2010 11:07:27 AM 1023 Views
I think if Lan dies... - 27/07/2010 09:45:05 AM 1018 Views
I was thinking Cadsuane *NM* - 27/07/2010 10:46:26 AM 448 Views
Also possible, of course - 27/07/2010 10:58:34 AM 973 Views
I don't consider it foreshadowing - 27/07/2010 11:15:37 AM 886 Views
Hmm, I doubt it... - 27/07/2010 11:25:57 AM 913 Views
Re: Hmm, I doubt it... - 28/07/2010 12:47:33 AM 931 Views
Either Lan or Rand, I guess. *NM* - 28/07/2010 08:02:37 AM 434 Views
Or... - 31/07/2010 02:59:22 AM 889 Views
It sounds a bit early for Lan's death - 28/07/2010 12:25:47 AM 1110 Views
Oh, I like this. - 28/07/2010 01:35:48 AM 1016 Views
I do too. - 28/07/2010 01:43:12 PM 883 Views
Perhaps, too early, yes... - 28/07/2010 07:57:34 AM 898 Views
Re: It sounds a bit early for Lan's death - 28/07/2010 08:43:31 AM 893 Views
RJ/ Harriet should have picked you, Dom... - 28/07/2010 08:47:34 AM 928 Views
The death of Elayne? Or Min? - 27/07/2010 02:47:11 PM 1004 Views
The problem with this idea is... - 27/07/2010 04:26:33 PM 949 Views
rand's fake death. from a POV that thinks he died for real *NM* - 27/07/2010 07:07:00 PM 507 Views
this is what i was just thinking *NM* - 27/07/2010 10:27:12 PM 429 Views
My bets are on Rand's actual death - 30/07/2010 07:40:06 AM 933 Views
Lan's death and Nynaeve's reaction would fit "heart-wrenching", Cadsuane's not so much for most *NM* - 29/07/2010 03:50:34 PM 416 Views
Certainly - 29/07/2010 05:34:11 PM 886 Views

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