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Re: BS twittered then, though... DomA Send a noteboard - 28/07/2010 12:01:26 AM
"Chapter 82--13% cut. I do think that some of these chapters may be combined before the end. I doubt the final book will have 94 chapters."


I really do hope he collapses more than "some" chapters together before the end. For a projected 320k word length, I would suggest no more than 60 chapters at most. And like DomaA, I hope Sanderson reduces the fragmentary jumping-back-and-forth style that was quite obtrusive in TGS. Is Sanderson aware of any of these criticisms? Given that he communicates so freely with fans as to give away a mini-spoiler, I would think there would be some opportunity to let him know we think this is an issue.

The way I read his twitter-posts earlier, though, was that he is now in the process of editing individual scenes. It could be that these chapters numbers are merely a designation of scenes he has to edit, which would mean that the book really consists of 94 scenes, rather than proper chapters. How would 94 scenes in a 320k word book compare to the number of scenes in a book such as KoD or TFoH?


94 scenes sounds more or less right, but I'm purely guessing.

Harriet has a large say in this stage of the process, and the way Brandon speaks, I'm guessing she'll have him combine scenes (and also likely re order some scenes). I remember now the number of chapters went down near the end for TGS to, and involved chopping scenes in two or combining two bits as one continuous scenes etc. That sort of editing was one of the last things RJ and Harriet worked on together before delivering a WOT manuscript. Harriet somewhat was more involved at this stage than usual, as she was the one looking for thematic links between scenes, and coming up with (most) chapter names.

It sounds quite possible the final number falls below 60 or even 55, which sounds a lot more reasonable for a WOT book of around 300k, considering we know it's a WOT that will also regroup a lot of "misc players" because Brandon pushed their reappearances to TOM to stick mostly to Rand/Egwene in TGS.


Hard to tell though, it depends how Brandon works. A lot of writers do 1 scene/1 chapter until they've done and then decide the final order of scenes and start regrouping them as chapters. A lot also don't work that way, rather determining beforehand that a chapter has a start point and the story needs to reach that end point when the chapter finishes. RJ worked the first way (and in complete disorder too - writing scenes that inspired him more then going back and forth in the book, not caring too much to assemble the final book, nor combine scenes into chapters until much later in the process).
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tGS: Chapter 81 comment from BS (*spoilers*?) - 27/07/2010 03:57:34 AM 2265 Views
Yeah, I saw that. - 27/07/2010 04:03:34 AM 1380 Views
Well I don't think it was too big of a scene or RJ would have written it I think. - 27/07/2010 04:11:01 AM 1257 Views
Re: Well I don't think it was too big of a scene or RJ would have written it I think. - 27/07/2010 05:17:22 AM 1195 Views
Re: Well I don't think it was too big of a scene or RJ would have written it I think. - 27/07/2010 09:18:54 AM 1082 Views
Yeah, BS said on Twitter... - 27/07/2010 09:47:41 AM 1249 Views
Again! - 27/07/2010 11:41:33 PM 1181 Views
Re: Yeah, I saw that. - 27/07/2010 05:28:53 AM 1189 Views
Yeah, I wondered about that... - 27/07/2010 05:02:27 PM 1074 Views
Re: Yeah, I wondered about that... - 28/07/2010 04:04:06 AM 986 Views
... and 94 chapters - 27/07/2010 04:04:51 AM 1221 Views
Thats a lot of chapters *NM* - 27/07/2010 05:16:35 AM 499 Views
Ouch.... - 27/07/2010 05:48:13 AM 1272 Views
BS twittered then, though... - 27/07/2010 08:15:06 AM 1160 Views
Re: BS twittered then, though... - 27/07/2010 05:20:56 PM 1084 Views
Re: BS twittered then, though... - 28/07/2010 12:01:26 AM 1177 Views
Don't you mean aMoL: Ch 81? - 27/07/2010 08:38:30 PM 1084 Views
The next book, Towers of Midnight, is meant. *NM* - 27/07/2010 10:24:43 PM 509 Views
Re: The next book, Towers of Midnight, is meant. - 27/07/2010 11:28:51 PM 1049 Views
Now he said... - 28/07/2010 08:32:17 AM 1167 Views
rock on *NM* - 27/07/2010 04:05:48 AM 473 Views
Hmm, Lan's death? - 27/07/2010 08:09:25 AM 1112 Views
sure, why not. my only problem is... - 27/07/2010 08:58:06 AM 1103 Views
I hope you are right. - 27/07/2010 09:19:44 AM 1108 Views
I don't think he will die - 27/07/2010 11:07:27 AM 1144 Views
I think if Lan dies... - 27/07/2010 09:45:05 AM 1156 Views
I was thinking Cadsuane *NM* - 27/07/2010 10:46:26 AM 495 Views
Also possible, of course - 27/07/2010 10:58:34 AM 1093 Views
I don't consider it foreshadowing - 27/07/2010 11:15:37 AM 994 Views
Hmm, I doubt it... - 27/07/2010 11:25:57 AM 1034 Views
Re: Hmm, I doubt it... - 28/07/2010 12:47:33 AM 1059 Views
Either Lan or Rand, I guess. *NM* - 28/07/2010 08:02:37 AM 486 Views
Or... - 31/07/2010 02:59:22 AM 1000 Views
It sounds a bit early for Lan's death - 28/07/2010 12:25:47 AM 1230 Views
Oh, I like this. - 28/07/2010 01:35:48 AM 1139 Views
I do too. - 28/07/2010 01:43:12 PM 1015 Views
Perhaps, too early, yes... - 28/07/2010 07:57:34 AM 1017 Views
Re: It sounds a bit early for Lan's death - 28/07/2010 08:43:31 AM 1009 Views
RJ/ Harriet should have picked you, Dom... - 28/07/2010 08:47:34 AM 1040 Views
The death of Elayne? Or Min? - 27/07/2010 02:47:11 PM 1119 Views
The problem with this idea is... - 27/07/2010 04:26:33 PM 1062 Views
rand's fake death. from a POV that thinks he died for real *NM* - 27/07/2010 07:07:00 PM 576 Views
this is what i was just thinking *NM* - 27/07/2010 10:27:12 PM 482 Views
My bets are on Rand's actual death - 30/07/2010 07:40:06 AM 1048 Views
Lan's death and Nynaeve's reaction would fit "heart-wrenching", Cadsuane's not so much for most *NM* - 29/07/2010 03:50:34 PM 464 Views
Certainly - 29/07/2010 05:34:11 PM 994 Views

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