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Not really a mistake, I guess Deadsy Send a noteboard - 25/09/2010 09:45:54 PM
but it's a good place to put it so I never have to make a topic about it :)


He uses "froze" too much. That's the big flashing Vegas arrow for me that "RJ did not write this."


"She froze." "He froze."

Egwene froze about 20 times in TGS
This message last edited by Deadsy on 25/09/2010 at 09:46:37 PM
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mistakes sanderson makes that bug you Oberonus - 23/09/2010 05:38:52 PM 1883 Views
Please read the posting rules for ToM *NM* Sidious - 23/09/2010 05:41:12 PM 3813 Views
Bael mentioning the Aiel Waste; characters using words that are too sophisticated or techical Cannoli - 23/09/2010 06:11:34 PM 1106 Views
I completely agree... DomA - 23/09/2010 08:54:17 PM 962 Views
Re: I completely agree... Cannoli - 24/09/2010 01:57:38 AM 889 Views
Re: I completely agree... DomA - 24/09/2010 06:39:17 PM 843 Views
Oh, sh**, Moiraine! I never thought about that! The comments about her in tGS suggest you're right Cannoli - 26/09/2010 03:23:56 AM 911 Views
The entire Graendal scene Marshall - 23/09/2010 06:27:03 PM 1004 Views
I think this is the type of info that RJ never got around to revealing. RugbyPlayingAshaman - 23/09/2010 08:46:51 PM 851 Views
Pretty much... DomA - 23/09/2010 09:16:26 PM 962 Views
The writing in the Graendal scene surprised me Narg - 24/09/2010 12:20:50 AM 868 Views
Re: The writing in the Graendal scene surprised me DomA - 24/09/2010 06:03:17 PM 865 Views
Particularly the way he described sex. It reeked of Mormon discomfort with the topic. Cannoli - 24/09/2010 02:04:08 AM 883 Views
Reeked? Great word. It seemed quite in line with RJ's own dealings with the topic. *NM* Narg - 24/09/2010 03:42:28 AM 382 Views
RJ had great sexual humor--he even went a little overboard sometimes IMO Marshall - 24/09/2010 11:28:25 PM 749 Views
Re: RJ had great sexual humor--he even went a little overboard sometimes IMO DomA - 25/09/2010 08:56:47 PM 786 Views
RJ said breasts all the time, but in a more clinical manner - folding arms under breasts, etc Cannoli - 26/09/2010 03:33:09 AM 918 Views
This stuff is cracking me up. Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:48:56 AM 777 Views
Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? Cannoli - 24/09/2010 04:09:48 AM 858 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? DomA - 24/09/2010 05:36:23 PM 949 Views
A lot of those are reasons why I always thought she was alive.. fionwe1987 - 24/09/2010 06:10:35 PM 967 Views
Re: A lot of those are reasons why I always thought she was alive.. DomA - 24/09/2010 07:54:54 PM 821 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? Sidious - 25/09/2010 10:02:02 AM 746 Views
hmm Marshall - 25/09/2010 02:43:09 PM 755 Views
How she knows its Balefire.. fionwe1987 - 25/09/2010 02:54:58 PM 731 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? DomA - 25/09/2010 08:30:59 PM 812 Views
Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? DomA - 25/09/2010 08:48:05 PM 831 Views
Some things... fionwe1987 - 25/09/2010 09:02:26 PM 730 Views
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Not really a mistake, I guess Deadsy - 25/09/2010 09:45:54 PM 755 Views
Well... Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:30:54 AM 855 Views
Thanks. I think I didn't notice it with RJ because Deadsy - 26/09/2010 06:35:47 AM 744 Views
Re: Thanks. I think I didn't notice it with RJ because Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:51:07 AM 748 Views
You're welcome *NM* Deadsy - 26/09/2010 07:17:36 AM 342 Views
Well... Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 07:37:39 AM 837 Views
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