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Not really a mistake, I guess Deadsy Send a noteboard - 25/09/2010 09:45:54 PM
but it's a good place to put it so I never have to make a topic about it :)


He uses "froze" too much. That's the big flashing Vegas arrow for me that "RJ did not write this."


"She froze." "He froze."

Egwene froze about 20 times in TGS
This message last edited by Deadsy on 25/09/2010 at 09:46:37 PM
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Please read the posting rules for ToM *NM* Sidious - 23/09/2010 05:41:12 PM 3804 Views
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Re: I completely agree... Cannoli - 24/09/2010 01:57:38 AM 870 Views
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The entire Graendal scene Marshall - 23/09/2010 06:27:03 PM 987 Views
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Particularly the way he described sex. It reeked of Mormon discomfort with the topic. Cannoli - 24/09/2010 02:04:08 AM 865 Views
Reeked? Great word. It seemed quite in line with RJ's own dealings with the topic. *NM* Narg - 24/09/2010 03:42:28 AM 372 Views
RJ had great sexual humor--he even went a little overboard sometimes IMO Marshall - 24/09/2010 11:28:25 PM 729 Views
Re: RJ had great sexual humor--he even went a little overboard sometimes IMO DomA - 25/09/2010 08:56:47 PM 767 Views
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This stuff is cracking me up. Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:48:56 AM 757 Views
Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? Cannoli - 24/09/2010 04:09:48 AM 843 Views
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A lot of those are reasons why I always thought she was alive.. fionwe1987 - 24/09/2010 06:10:35 PM 950 Views
Re: A lot of those are reasons why I always thought she was alive.. DomA - 24/09/2010 07:54:54 PM 805 Views
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Re: Actually, didn't RJ do the Forsaken infodump thing too? DomA - 25/09/2010 08:30:59 PM 794 Views
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Some things... fionwe1987 - 25/09/2010 09:02:26 PM 718 Views
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Not really a mistake, I guess Deadsy - 25/09/2010 09:45:54 PM 743 Views
Well... Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:30:54 AM 839 Views
Thanks. I think I didn't notice it with RJ because Deadsy - 26/09/2010 06:35:47 AM 727 Views
Re: Thanks. I think I didn't notice it with RJ because Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 06:51:07 AM 726 Views
You're welcome *NM* Deadsy - 26/09/2010 07:17:36 AM 333 Views
Well... Tamyrlin - 26/09/2010 07:37:39 AM 819 Views
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