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Bela. Spoilers, of course. nossy Send a noteboard - 15/03/2013 09:44:03 PM

Ok, I never got into all the Bela, Narg, whatever stuff, but am I wrong that the final sentence she gets is the worst in the entire series? I didn't need her to do something massive, but, holy cow, "...then died" is like, "exit stage left."

I was at the point that I cared somewhat (but not much), and then that line hit me and caused such a blip in the story that I did care, against my will. Argh.

Again, I'm having trouble being entirely fair - I was always fairly fond of the Pony That Could, but something struck me as entirely wrong about that line.

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