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View original postOf course it would have helped had Brandon been able to write Mat Cauthon at all. In the light of what RJ really planned (Mat, between his fears of Rand, his fears for Tuon and his traumatic rescue of Moiraine found it was all too much to handle and he broke (the Hand that falters) finally deciding to flee his duty and go hide in his wife's skirts in Ebou Dar). Brandon really totally ruined Mat. He didn't seem to have understood that RJ had darkened Mat more and more in COT/KOD and would have brought him to the edge, where he might lose the readers's sympathy (much like Egwene has done with a good part of the readership), before redeeming him. To be honest, I don't think anyone but RJ could have the fine balancing act this would have required to work, but Brandon was still a far cry from pulling this off decently, with his Mat the buffoon. He focused on the humor aspect of the trickster when RJ more and more focused Mat on deadpan humor and the darker kind of "practical jokes" (Mat's trickster tricks in KOD were killing Seanchan left and right, merely a prelude to the giant prank he would pull off at TG for Demandred, sacrificing "half the Light" to save the world, much as he had given an eye for Moiraine.

... do you think the notion of forcing Mat to trust Tuon to return at the end of the Last Battle is supposed to be related to this desertion?


Pretty sure this was to be the case. I think it would have begun with Mat having to become peacemaker between Egwene and Tuon. Which he did, but by making it a one line comic cameo, the thematic implications were completely lost.

The arc should have been:
1. Mat abandons Rand, Egwene and Elayne to go to Tuon.
2. Egwene and Elayne keenly feel betrayed. Rand decides it doesn't matter and confronts Tuon (and Mat), forcing them to do their part.
3. Things go to shit for the Aes Sedai, and Egwene has to make the difficult decision of not just trusting Tuon, but forgiving Mat.
4. As things go further south, Egwene (and Elayne) have to make the difficult decision of leaving the entire Last Battle in Mat's hand. This decision should have been a lot harder for Egwene, given that Mat had become a Seanchan prince, and abandoned the Randlanders to go to Tuon. Her deciding to finally do it should have been about a lot more than simply trusting Mat because she knew him as a kid. The aspect of essentially surrendering her fate to the Seanchan to control the outcome of the war was absent, which was absurd.
5. Mat himself should have had grave doubts about what he was being asked to do. He has been resigned to some level of duty for a long time, but here he was offering to take the fate of the entire world in his hands. This was another massive decision that was presented underwhelmingly.

On the whole, the Seanchan-Mat-Aes Sedai storyline was one of the worst.

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