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*nods* ironclad Send a noteboard - 11/04/2011 07:43:48 PM
First of all, I found that sex scene absolutely atrocious. It seems to me that Tanith Lee obviously never intended to read that passage aloud because the words just sound all wrong and smashed together in a haphazard way. It doesn't flow, it doesn't drag me along with it the way a good sex scene in a book should.

That's exactly how I felt too. Trying way too hard to sound like good literature, but not sexy at all.
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That is good. *NM* Aeryn - 11/04/2011 01:52:31 AM 329 Views
Cersei and random noble chick, last GRRM novel I read. (like 5 years ago) *NM* badassashaman - 11/04/2011 12:04:17 AM 282 Views
Gaiman's American Gods. Novo - 11/04/2011 09:17:14 AM 845 Views
This request is causing me a great deal of distress. Tom - 11/04/2011 04:12:19 PM 991 Views
*nods* ironclad - 11/04/2011 07:43:48 PM 870 Views
You have to type up some samples for me, b/c so far I think your crazy. I love that paragraph. *NM* Aeryn - 11/04/2011 11:42:26 PM 258 Views
"you're", not "your". And the paragraph was awful. Tom - 12/04/2011 12:28:02 AM 671 Views
Yes, and punctuation marks go inside the quodation marks, "like so." Aeryn - 12/04/2011 05:16:55 PM 827 Views
Wait... they do? rebelaessedai - 14/04/2011 03:26:10 AM 643 Views
No they don't, at least not in my reply. Tom - 14/04/2011 05:44:50 AM 692 Views
Re: No they don't, at least not in my reply. Camilla - 14/04/2011 04:38:37 PM 628 Views
That would be wrong and ugly. Aeryn - 14/04/2011 04:51:05 PM 642 Views
... *NM* Camilla - 14/04/2011 04:52:20 PM 286 Views
Substantive critique of that travesty of an attempt at writing: Tom - 14/04/2011 06:00:16 AM 726 Views
Re: Substantive critique of that travesty of an attempt at writing: Aeryn - 14/04/2011 04:30:58 PM 710 Views
Once more into the breach Tom - 14/04/2011 05:27:37 PM 824 Views
I agree with you on some points, disagree on others. Legolas - 14/04/2011 06:57:07 PM 897 Views
Only in America Camilla - 14/04/2011 04:36:38 PM 813 Views
The ones in Illuminatus were sometimes hot, and usually pretty funny. *NM* Panorphaeon - 11/04/2011 07:34:49 PM 278 Views
I understand why you like this. rebelaessedai - 12/04/2011 02:35:37 AM 681 Views
Would one I wrote myself count? imlad - 14/04/2011 12:23:43 PM 682 Views
No. *NM* Vivien - 21/04/2011 04:35:47 AM 288 Views
I read a good one last night... by Tanith Lee! rebelaessedai - 16/04/2011 08:38:52 PM 600 Views
Re: Your favorite sex scene (post here) Hopper Aes Sedai - 17/04/2011 11:24:28 PM 846 Views
Oh that Roman erotica A Deathwatch Guard - 22/04/2011 10:14:21 PM 647 Views
I really enjoyed that. Darth_Katie - 23/04/2011 06:20:57 AM 639 Views
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