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*nods* ironclad Send a noteboard - 11/04/2011 07:43:48 PM
First of all, I found that sex scene absolutely atrocious. It seems to me that Tanith Lee obviously never intended to read that passage aloud because the words just sound all wrong and smashed together in a haphazard way. It doesn't flow, it doesn't drag me along with it the way a good sex scene in a book should.

That's exactly how I felt too. Trying way too hard to sound like good literature, but not sexy at all.
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That is good. *NM* Aeryn - 11/04/2011 01:52:31 AM 398 Views
Cersei and random noble chick, last GRRM novel I read. (like 5 years ago) *NM* badassashaman - 11/04/2011 12:04:17 AM 351 Views
Gaiman's American Gods. Novo - 11/04/2011 09:17:14 AM 1077 Views
This request is causing me a great deal of distress. Tom - 11/04/2011 04:12:19 PM 1157 Views
*nods* ironclad - 11/04/2011 07:43:48 PM 1033 Views
You have to type up some samples for me, b/c so far I think your crazy. I love that paragraph. *NM* Aeryn - 11/04/2011 11:42:26 PM 327 Views
"you're", not "your". And the paragraph was awful. Tom - 12/04/2011 12:28:02 AM 846 Views
Yes, and punctuation marks go inside the quodation marks, "like so." Aeryn - 12/04/2011 05:16:55 PM 1005 Views
Wait... they do? rebelaessedai - 14/04/2011 03:26:10 AM 816 Views
No they don't, at least not in my reply. Tom - 14/04/2011 05:44:50 AM 867 Views
Re: No they don't, at least not in my reply. Camilla - 14/04/2011 04:38:37 PM 803 Views
That would be wrong and ugly. Aeryn - 14/04/2011 04:51:05 PM 813 Views
... *NM* Camilla - 14/04/2011 04:52:20 PM 353 Views
Substantive critique of that travesty of an attempt at writing: Tom - 14/04/2011 06:00:16 AM 869 Views
Re: Substantive critique of that travesty of an attempt at writing: Aeryn - 14/04/2011 04:30:58 PM 883 Views
Once more into the breach Tom - 14/04/2011 05:27:37 PM 1002 Views
I agree with you on some points, disagree on others. Legolas - 14/04/2011 06:57:07 PM 1064 Views
Only in America Camilla - 14/04/2011 04:36:38 PM 980 Views
The ones in Illuminatus were sometimes hot, and usually pretty funny. *NM* Panorphaeon - 11/04/2011 07:34:49 PM 345 Views
I understand why you like this. rebelaessedai - 12/04/2011 02:35:37 AM 852 Views
Would one I wrote myself count? imlad - 14/04/2011 12:23:43 PM 843 Views
No. *NM* Vivien - 21/04/2011 04:35:47 AM 352 Views
I read a good one last night... by Tanith Lee! rebelaessedai - 16/04/2011 08:38:52 PM 768 Views
Re: Your favorite sex scene (post here) Hopper Aes Sedai - 17/04/2011 11:24:28 PM 1048 Views
Oh that Roman erotica A Deathwatch Guard - 22/04/2011 10:14:21 PM 819 Views
I really enjoyed that. Darth_Katie - 23/04/2011 06:20:57 AM 788 Views
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