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Being sneaky, hmmm. I like this idea. *NM* Blaine Send a noteboard - 14/12/2009 07:59:39 AM
A little creative rewording can get around that little problem. "When asked to describe the "golden age" of marriage many people might describe the white picket fences, 2.7 children, a working husband, and a loving housewife that was such a popular image of marriage in the 1950's."

It's far from perfect, but it works to sneak in a question without really asking it. It has the same effect as asking it without violating your professor's preference of not asking a question to open an essay.
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What do you think of this intro? Blaine - 14/12/2009 06:14:51 AM 591 Views
I'm not a fan of the first two sentences. Brian - 14/12/2009 06:42:10 AM 367 Views
Well, i know for a fact that he doesn't opening with questions Blaine - 14/12/2009 07:02:03 AM 473 Views
Ahhh, one of those professors. Brian - 14/12/2009 07:22:46 AM 353 Views
Being sneaky, hmmm. I like this idea. *NM* Blaine - 14/12/2009 07:59:39 AM 178 Views
Sentence fragments are unacceptable in technical writing. You need to fix that. Ghavrel - 14/12/2009 06:51:05 AM 362 Views
I think i see what you are talking about, thanks. *NM* Blaine - 14/12/2009 07:05:04 AM 188 Views
It's like a Pleasentville film review. *NM* AgentOrange - 14/12/2009 09:54:14 AM 143 Views
I actually mention it a few times later. *NM* Blaine - 14/12/2009 08:48:11 PM 187 Views
I want to stick a wikipedia-style "who?" in there. Tim - 14/12/2009 10:53:02 AM 348 Views
That's actually how we're taught to write in American high schools... Lupine - 14/12/2009 02:39:56 PM 343 Views
Part of my problem is that he hasn't told me what level this is for. Tim - 14/12/2009 03:04:40 PM 323 Views
Aye, but it's an intro. Rebekah - 15/12/2009 08:07:38 AM 291 Views
References should come at the first mention of whatever it is. *NM* Tim - 15/12/2009 08:42:27 AM 140 Views
You presume correctly Blaine - 15/12/2009 02:19:07 PM 383 Views
It's simply an introduction, my citations and stuff come in a little later. *NM* Blaine - 14/12/2009 08:49:15 PM 183 Views
I smell a strawman... Tashmere - 15/12/2009 02:25:36 AM 350 Views
well it was in response to a prompt which stated people call it the "Golden Age". My hands were tied *NM* Blaine - 15/12/2009 02:20:54 PM 173 Views
Stylistically it needs a lot of work. Tom - 15/12/2009 03:28:24 AM 403 Views
Hell, with a critique like that I may start putting up my introductory paragraphs. *NM* Ghavrel - 15/12/2009 04:37:53 AM 211 Views
Wow, thanks *NM* Blaine - 15/12/2009 02:22:48 PM 197 Views
That was a good critique. *NM* Tashmere - 16/12/2009 01:21:28 AM 140 Views
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