The more I look at TGS and TOM, I really don't see how you could've split the four story lines there. The way you proposed it to be, it would've been something like this:
- first books is a dull story of Perrin's fighting his leadership identity and moving his camp from one muddy place to another, another book about unresolved and boring Aes Sedai politiking, Rand's going badly worse and doing basically nothing and as final "do nothing plot" we would've been reading more about Mat going to every tavern in Caemlyn; As a result, most of the readers would've hated it.
- suddenly in the second book, Perrin accepts his leaderships and doing his awesome stuff in TAR with White Tower plot resolved out of blue, Rand became Zen and Moraine is rescued.
I frankly don't see how you could resolve better what's been resolved. Each story line resolved in TGS (Egwene uniting White Tower and Rand becoming Zen) was resolved in very nice way. I don't see how it could've been resolved in shorter chapters. Each story line resolved in ToM (Perrin, Mat and Elayne) was resolved nicely too. And again, I don't see how you could've put less chapters there as well. That means that each of story lines requires at least half a book to be resolved.
If we are to split the books by timeline - that leaves us with the first book with four storylines unresolved, but almost at the point of resolution. And all resolution for all storylines happen in the second book. Frankly I hate it much more than mere timeline inconvinience.
- first books is a dull story of Perrin's fighting his leadership identity and moving his camp from one muddy place to another, another book about unresolved and boring Aes Sedai politiking, Rand's going badly worse and doing basically nothing and as final "do nothing plot" we would've been reading more about Mat going to every tavern in Caemlyn; As a result, most of the readers would've hated it.
- suddenly in the second book, Perrin accepts his leaderships and doing his awesome stuff in TAR with White Tower plot resolved out of blue, Rand became Zen and Moraine is rescued.
I frankly don't see how you could resolve better what's been resolved. Each story line resolved in TGS (Egwene uniting White Tower and Rand becoming Zen) was resolved in very nice way. I don't see how it could've been resolved in shorter chapters. Each story line resolved in ToM (Perrin, Mat and Elayne) was resolved nicely too. And again, I don't see how you could've put less chapters there as well. That means that each of story lines requires at least half a book to be resolved.
If we are to split the books by timeline - that leaves us with the first book with four storylines unresolved, but almost at the point of resolution. And all resolution for all storylines happen in the second book. Frankly I hate it much more than mere timeline inconvinience.
This message last edited by Skeeve the Great on 28/11/2010 at 05:33:35 AM
What was the purpose of Graendal?!
- 25/11/2010 03:54:29 PM
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BS wanted to put her behind a "complicated" plot
- 25/11/2010 04:11:01 PM
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Yes, it's BSand's fault. RJ couldn't have EVER planned it all out himself right? Yes mm hmm
- 25/11/2010 04:19:02 PM
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- 25/11/2010 04:19:02 PM
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read DomA's review. BullShit ruined the series. *NM*
- 25/11/2010 04:31:56 PM
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Links or it didn't happen.
- 25/11/2010 04:53:24 PM
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oh but, bookwyrm, now they have such a nice easy scapegoat!! *NM*
- 26/11/2010 01:35:53 AM
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And DomA is such infallible authority on the all things WoT why? *NM*
- 25/11/2010 06:00:42 PM
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I'd say that DomA is one of the most thoughtful posters here. He researches his comments and gives
- 25/11/2010 06:47:58 PM
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That doesn't mean he has any actual evidence as to BS tampering with RJ's notes
- 26/11/2010 01:33:08 AM
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Re: That doesn't mean he has any actual evidence as to BS tampering with RJ's notes
- 26/11/2010 03:47:38 PM
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Re: That doesn't mean he has any actual evidence as to BS tampering with RJ's notes
- 26/11/2010 09:40:54 PM
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Re: That doesn't mean he has any actual evidence as to BS tampering with RJ's notes
- 27/11/2010 12:22:02 AM
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Re: That doesn't mean he has any actual evidence as to BS tampering with RJ's notes
- 27/11/2010 06:08:15 AM
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Re: That doesn't mean he has any actual evidence as to BS tampering with RJ's notes
- 27/11/2010 04:54:00 PM
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Okay, what would you have had him do?
- 27/11/2010 01:54:19 AM
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Interesting question.
- 27/11/2010 02:58:55 AM
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Re: Interesting question.
- 27/11/2010 07:56:38 PM
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Sorry, Dominic, but I strongly disagree.
- 28/11/2010 05:30:28 AM
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Re: Okay, what would you have had him do?
- 27/11/2010 06:02:22 PM
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clearly the timeline is wonky, but it's easy enough to keep track of
- 04/12/2010 05:32:34 PM
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A minor aside
- 26/11/2010 02:49:03 PM
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oops minor omission, i meant the last 3 books were meant to be one big tome *NM*
- 26/11/2010 04:40:53 PM
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because he's right on this account. This book was a trainwreck *NM*
- 26/11/2010 05:11:01 AM
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It's pacing and editing was bad, I see and agree on that. But the story overall was great.
- 27/11/2010 09:21:02 AM
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Re: Yes, it's BSand's fault. RJ couldn't have EVER planned it all out himself right? Yes mm hmm
- 25/11/2010 04:45:12 PM
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- 25/11/2010 04:45:12 PM
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RJ was set on it being one book hoping he could finish it before he died *NM*
- 25/11/2010 05:45:07 PM
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Do you honestly think Jordan would have kept that "promise" if he were still alive? Seriously ...
- 27/11/2010 09:01:49 AM
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that's a pretty poor argument for showing BS as messing everything up
- 26/11/2010 01:29:16 AM
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Re: that's a pretty poor argument for showing BS as messing everything up
- 26/11/2010 10:45:51 AM
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Well
- 26/11/2010 03:01:46 PM
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I have no doubt at all that RJ laid out the idea of Graendal being discovered and escaping
- 04/12/2010 07:07:14 PM
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Lots
- 25/11/2010 04:38:52 PM
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Re: Lots
- 25/11/2010 04:53:38 PM
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What is the point of anything then?
- 25/11/2010 05:01:15 PM
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I don't agree with "deus ex machina style"
- 25/11/2010 05:58:19 PM
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Re: I don't agree with "deus ex machina style"
- 25/11/2010 06:22:31 PM
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Re: I don't agree with "deus ex machina style"
- 25/11/2010 06:34:57 PM
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Yes, she was useless to this storyline.
- 25/11/2010 11:40:57 PM
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If it hadn't been Graendal, it WOULD have been rather contrived...
- 26/11/2010 01:35:12 AM
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Well, we were under the impression that Moridin alone had access to the True Power.
- 26/11/2010 02:36:31 AM
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I was under the impression other Forsaken had access as well, something pointed out by their POVs ..
- 27/11/2010 09:09:17 AM
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