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gawyn is no more annoying than in other books moondog Send a noteboard - 28/11/2009 12:23:12 AM

What things irritated you in the book? I mean this strictly from a plot or character PoV, not inaccuracies or problems you had with Brandon's writing. Here are mine..

1. The Aes Sedai calling Nynaeve 'child'. It's so ridiculous that a woman who has accomplished so much is still being looked at as an Accepted.

2. Gawyn still not believing anyone that Rand didn't hurt his mother. Gareth was probably the fourth person to try and pursuade him.

3. The absence of Graendal on screen. In some ways this was her book, but she was absent.

4. Having once again heard no news on what Demandred is doing.

5. Bubbles of evil. They get in the way of everything. Go away.

That is all.


we just see a little more of his pig-headedness in this one than before.

the thing that annoyed me the most about this book i've already posted about (the "anyway" post in case you missed it), but as far as characters go, cadsuane came out as more self-righteous and annoying than in previous books imho.

also, only cursory involvement with mat and perrin, and mat's story arc being uncompelling compared to his previous arc in KoD.

and i think most of all, the way the plot was handled so bluntly as if most of the major points were being smashed into your face with a sledgehammer and giving a little too much predictability. when semihrage was freed, did anyone *not* see that the serving woman was going to be semihrage in disguise?
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LOL Agreed on #5, 6 and 10 *NM* - 24/11/2009 04:20:36 PM 563 Views
Lol *NM* - 25/11/2009 07:00:07 AM 405 Views
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Funny post - 27/11/2009 02:28:20 PM 719 Views
Bad guy retirement community - 29/11/2009 04:34:35 AM 870 Views
We did see Graendal on-screen... in the Prologue. - 24/11/2009 04:34:39 PM 854 Views
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You've read the earlier books right? - 24/11/2009 05:05:45 PM 752 Views
Wrong place, ignore *NM* - 24/11/2009 05:28:34 PM 337 Views
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These were smaller doses dude.. Again, the previous books... - 24/11/2009 05:31:16 PM 767 Views
Still, if - 24/11/2009 05:42:35 PM 699 Views
What? - 24/11/2009 06:05:57 PM 910 Views
Yes you are right *NM* - 25/11/2009 07:00:28 AM 775 Views
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Then you haven't been trying hard enough. *NM* - 25/11/2009 02:07:32 AM 333 Views
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Well.... - 24/11/2009 09:28:09 PM 681 Views
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Actually Merise irritated me much more *NM* *NM* - 25/11/2009 07:03:40 AM 336 Views
Oh yes, her also. *NM* - 25/11/2009 07:51:21 AM 332 Views
Merise definitely regressed in this book - 27/11/2009 01:04:35 AM 732 Views
Gawyn in general. - 25/11/2009 02:15:06 PM 781 Views
gawyn is no more annoying than in other books - 28/11/2009 12:23:12 AM 716 Views
Finally read it! - 30/11/2009 01:36:19 AM 910 Views
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