RJ may have had an educated nobleman or woman use such words in their style of speaking.
But for the narrator to use it feels incorrect.
Also in the context of some farmer out in the fields.
Anyway, it struck me along with the direct reference to tradewinds - so now we know the Aryth Ocean is the Atlantic - and when he said the wind was playing with the masts of ships.
RJ would have said the wind was swaying the masts of the ships, or something else. "Playing with" feels wrong.
So I'm over critical. So what. It feels wrong.
But for the narrator to use it feels incorrect.
Also in the context of some farmer out in the fields.
Anyway, it struck me along with the direct reference to tradewinds - so now we know the Aryth Ocean is the Atlantic - and when he said the wind was playing with the masts of ships.
RJ would have said the wind was swaying the masts of the ships, or something else. "Playing with" feels wrong.
So I'm over critical. So what. It feels wrong.
This message last edited by Shannow on 01/10/2010 at 03:53:56 PM
Chapter 1 released
- 01/10/2010 01:40:27 PM
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For the record, it sucks waiting for you people to wake up and read this
- 01/10/2010 01:50:02 PM
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- 01/10/2010 01:50:02 PM
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Not too much new to work with. Is "she" Egwene? Cads? Someone else? *NM*
- 01/10/2010 02:01:12 PM
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Well damn. Was that Buddha?
- 01/10/2010 02:36:29 PM
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This blaming Brandon for everything stuff is getting old.
- 01/10/2010 02:55:04 PM
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I've never blamed BS for anything (expect fucking up Mat's character)
- 01/10/2010 03:27:36 PM
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BOOOOO I want Sunshine and Rainbows damnit
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- 01/10/2010 11:04:21 PM
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- 01/10/2010 11:04:21 PM
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Poorly written, but I still got goosebumps at Rand's importance finally being demonstrated...
- 01/10/2010 03:14:48 PM
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"My father’s estates do produce lumber and fine woods, and ice peppers, and furs, and more besides."
- 01/10/2010 03:27:22 PM
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It's the style. In the Randland context, the word "grows" is more appropriate...
- 01/10/2010 03:31:22 PM
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did you not read my reply title? That was a quote from The Shadow Rising, same exact context. *NM*
- 01/10/2010 03:32:23 PM
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Fine. So be it. It still feels wrong to me. *NM*
- 01/10/2010 03:36:16 PM
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but it's all RJ's fault
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- 01/10/2010 03:40:14 PM
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- 01/10/2010 03:40:14 PM
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Maybe it's in the context of BS's sentences...
- 01/10/2010 03:44:28 PM
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I feel bad for you. I really do.
- 01/10/2010 03:54:02 PM
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Yes it does. But it is not conscious. It comes from 15 years of growing up reading Wot..
- 01/10/2010 03:55:39 PM
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As if the rest of us haven't been reading for just as long.
- 04/10/2010 05:00:32 PM
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I've been reading the series sinc e EoTW hit bookshelves circa 1990
- 05/10/2010 11:10:08 PM
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It sounds like Rand is finally growing up
- 01/10/2010 03:46:54 PM
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He has achieved enlightenment and knows more than everyone else, so he doesn't have to be insecure..
- 01/10/2010 03:52:23 PM
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I don't agree - I think that what he is going to tell Egwene will be unpleasant for everyone.
- 01/10/2010 04:07:19 PM
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Why would that upset her?
- 01/10/2010 04:21:29 PM
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Because I think she was hoping to work with him to solve some of these problems
- 01/10/2010 04:42:33 PM
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I tend to agree
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The Sickness
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thoughts
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Re: thoughts
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Egwene
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Re: Egwene
- 04/10/2010 09:44:00 AM
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Nonsense
- 05/10/2010 03:52:31 AM
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Re: Nonsense
- 05/10/2010 09:53:06 AM
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seriously! Read what Egwene actually says sometime...
- 06/10/2010 08:17:15 PM
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Re: seriously! Read what Egwene actually says sometime...
- 06/10/2010 08:40:39 PM
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want to back that up with an actual quote from Egwene's mouth?
- 06/10/2010 11:01:09 PM
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Re: want to back that up with an actual quote from Egwene's mouth?
- 07/10/2010 09:45:21 PM
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Yes, but her comment is far closer to the truth than his!
- 07/10/2010 10:18:54 PM
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I'd say
- 08/10/2010 08:30:17 PM
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just like Egwene is 100% correct about AS being compelled
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Re: just like Egwene is 100% correct about AS being compelled
- 09/10/2010 11:46:54 AM
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And Egwene was the only person to do things like this? Elayne made a huge public show
- 09/10/2010 02:49:13 PM
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Fan...freakin...tastic. Had chills and watery eyes the whole time. This book is going to ROCK. *NM*
- 01/10/2010 08:18:20 PM
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I am so confused...
- 01/10/2010 09:45:32 PM
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Re: I am so confused...
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Re: I am so confused...
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That may have been an indirect result of using the TP, rather than a direct one
- 03/10/2010 03:30:24 AM
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I'm surprised no one has discussed Seanchan yet
- 01/10/2010 10:20:37 PM
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I believe the murderer is a random noble blamed for killing the royal family *NM*
- 02/10/2010 01:58:53 AM
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Moridin....
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I've seen it theorized (before chapter 1 was released) that
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I don't think...
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Re:TOM Chapter 1 Biblical Parallel
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dammit how am i supposed to read this without reading the prologue first?
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- 03/10/2010 08:51:58 PM
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- 03/10/2010 08:51:58 PM
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The revival of the Green Man?
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Re: The revival of the Green Man?
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You assume the supply of Souls is finite
- 05/10/2010 02:49:28 AM
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Yes
- 05/10/2010 02:08:10 PM
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That doesn't make sense
- 06/10/2010 04:14:54 AM
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you assume that a soul is tainted forever and not returned to a nutral state upon death.
- 06/10/2010 06:43:11 AM
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O... you assume I don't know my stuff
- 06/10/2010 02:35:06 PM
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- 06/10/2010 02:35:06 PM
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ARGH! Spoilers! Spoilers! MINE EYES!!!!
- 14/10/2010 08:52:53 AM
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Or at least not click the threads CLEARLY designated as being about ToM.
- 24/10/2010 02:10:13 PM
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