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Re: Have some question charlene Send a noteboard - 29/11/2010 09:13:17 AM
Yes, of course, why didn't I think of blaming myself for the way the timeline has been butchered and crudely stuck back together? It's obviously my fault that Brandon chose to write it the way he did.

The whole story was horribly messed up. We get POV's from characters who are obviously not where we expect them to be after reading TGS with no explanation as to what is going on. The timeline chops and changes between chapters and POV's so much that you end up with little idea of what is happening when. The visions the three ta'veren have of each other is an attempt to keep things in perspective but they could have been made much more clear, there were some obscure visions in there that gave little clue as to when the characters were in relation to each other.

And I wouldn't call anyone who comes to a fan site a casual reader. People who look online for discussion boards have more than a passing interest in the books and also had prior information about how the novels were going to be structured. Coming into TOM cold without having heard anything about how Brandon had chosen to split things up or that the timelines were going to be seriously out of sync during most of the book is confusing. Going back to Perrin, at the end of TGS Tam is with Rand and during their conversation mentions the queen and the Whitecloaks. When we join Perrin in TOM he isn't where we expect him to be from this conversation. There are no Whitecloaks, Morgase hasn't revealed herself and he's wading through the muck while reverting back to whingeing about being Lord Perrin. I don't agree that it's the smooth, sensible transition that the OP said it was (which is what I originally disagreed with BTW, I wasn't bashing Brandon for the way he chose to write it, I was simply disagreeing with the OP's point of view which clashes with my own). After the long story arcs with Rand and Egwene in TGS I think that the switch to jumping aruond in the different timelines is very noticeable, distracting and confusing when you weren't expecting it.

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/tGS: These are damned good books. - 27/11/2010 02:22:05 AM 1497 Views
OK. *NM* - 27/11/2010 02:35:06 AM 338 Views
meh. ToM sucked for me. after tGS, I had become a bit hopeful, but now I see ... - 27/11/2010 03:39:49 AM 854 Views
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Yeah, they are - 27/11/2010 06:03:59 AM 791 Views
Disagree strongly on the time line issue - TOM showed what a mistake splitting by 'clusters' was IMO - 27/11/2010 07:24:55 AM 834 Views
Re: Disagree strongly on the time line issue - TOM showed what a mistake splitting by 'clusters' was - 27/11/2010 05:59:47 PM 724 Views
I agree with this as well. - 27/11/2010 06:31:37 PM 836 Views
Splitting it this way was the only realistic choice - 29/11/2010 01:58:52 PM 700 Views
Disagree - plus COT lacked almost anything full stop - 30/11/2010 12:03:24 AM 872 Views
Re: Disagree - plus COT lacked almost anything full stop - 30/11/2010 12:18:57 AM 721 Views
It will be better than CoT, sure, but still not good enough to appease most fans - 30/11/2010 06:20:38 PM 860 Views
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BS style - 27/11/2010 07:25:38 AM 915 Views
That's the thing! If it was in its normal, Jordan paced writing, ... - 27/11/2010 08:52:05 AM 780 Views
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And you know how RJ would've outlined the books from where? - 28/11/2010 05:07:31 AM 774 Views
BURN! *NM* - 29/11/2010 01:20:21 AM 343 Views
Re: And you know how RJ would've outlined the books from where? - 29/11/2010 08:16:12 AM 697 Views
so...you're guessing. - 30/11/2010 08:08:14 PM 756 Views
Re: so...you're guessing. - 01/12/2010 08:08:41 PM 657 Views
My only problems are Mats sudden drop in literacy and the timeline. *NM* - 27/11/2010 11:51:25 AM 358 Views
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You stole my putters name, btw. - 29/11/2010 01:14:47 PM 812 Views
I had no problem following the jumps. - 29/11/2010 05:05:01 PM 693 Views
Yeah, anyone who found this bad clearly hasn't read Catch 22 - 30/11/2010 04:38:12 AM 674 Views
I didn't have any problems either. *NM* - 30/11/2010 04:40:24 AM 356 Views

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