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Re: Have some question charlene Send a noteboard - 29/11/2010 09:13:17 AM
Yes, of course, why didn't I think of blaming myself for the way the timeline has been butchered and crudely stuck back together? It's obviously my fault that Brandon chose to write it the way he did.

The whole story was horribly messed up. We get POV's from characters who are obviously not where we expect them to be after reading TGS with no explanation as to what is going on. The timeline chops and changes between chapters and POV's so much that you end up with little idea of what is happening when. The visions the three ta'veren have of each other is an attempt to keep things in perspective but they could have been made much more clear, there were some obscure visions in there that gave little clue as to when the characters were in relation to each other.

And I wouldn't call anyone who comes to a fan site a casual reader. People who look online for discussion boards have more than a passing interest in the books and also had prior information about how the novels were going to be structured. Coming into TOM cold without having heard anything about how Brandon had chosen to split things up or that the timelines were going to be seriously out of sync during most of the book is confusing. Going back to Perrin, at the end of TGS Tam is with Rand and during their conversation mentions the queen and the Whitecloaks. When we join Perrin in TOM he isn't where we expect him to be from this conversation. There are no Whitecloaks, Morgase hasn't revealed herself and he's wading through the muck while reverting back to whingeing about being Lord Perrin. I don't agree that it's the smooth, sensible transition that the OP said it was (which is what I originally disagreed with BTW, I wasn't bashing Brandon for the way he chose to write it, I was simply disagreeing with the OP's point of view which clashes with my own). After the long story arcs with Rand and Egwene in TGS I think that the switch to jumping aruond in the different timelines is very noticeable, distracting and confusing when you weren't expecting it.

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/tGS: These are damned good books. - 27/11/2010 02:22:05 AM 1512 Views
OK. *NM* - 27/11/2010 02:35:06 AM 346 Views
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Disagree strongly on the time line issue - TOM showed what a mistake splitting by 'clusters' was IMO - 27/11/2010 07:24:55 AM 850 Views
Re: Disagree strongly on the time line issue - TOM showed what a mistake splitting by 'clusters' was - 27/11/2010 05:59:47 PM 741 Views
I agree with this as well. - 27/11/2010 06:31:37 PM 853 Views
Splitting it this way was the only realistic choice - 29/11/2010 01:58:52 PM 713 Views
Disagree - plus COT lacked almost anything full stop - 30/11/2010 12:03:24 AM 889 Views
Re: Disagree - plus COT lacked almost anything full stop - 30/11/2010 12:18:57 AM 736 Views
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BS style - 27/11/2010 07:25:38 AM 930 Views
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And you know how RJ would've outlined the books from where? - 28/11/2010 05:07:31 AM 787 Views
BURN! *NM* - 29/11/2010 01:20:21 AM 350 Views
Re: And you know how RJ would've outlined the books from where? - 29/11/2010 08:16:12 AM 710 Views
so...you're guessing. - 30/11/2010 08:08:14 PM 770 Views
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My only problems are Mats sudden drop in literacy and the timeline. *NM* - 27/11/2010 11:51:25 AM 366 Views
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You stole my putters name, btw. - 29/11/2010 01:14:47 PM 824 Views
I had no problem following the jumps. - 29/11/2010 05:05:01 PM 709 Views
Yeah, anyone who found this bad clearly hasn't read Catch 22 - 30/11/2010 04:38:12 AM 686 Views
I didn't have any problems either. *NM* - 30/11/2010 04:40:24 AM 364 Views

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