Or rather, does this book share any traits in common with pornography?
Larry Send a noteboard - 25/01/2010 11:14:01 PM
This is crossposted from a review I did recently for a review challenge of reviewing pre-1960 fictions:
In this quote from a recent French edition of 19th century French author Alexandre Dumas' 1844 novel, Le Comte de Monte-Cristo, Umberto Eco (in French translation, since he originally wrote it in Italian for another publication) lays bare a problem that several readers in the early 21st century might have with parsing 19th century novels. Eco notes that this novel is "a great novel badly written." It is full of repetitive motifs, the adjectives are piled on thicker than gravy on a country steak, there are digressions after digressions, and if twenty words could suffice instead of merely one, Dumas would utilize those twenty words...and likely a few others. In short, the list of faults that can be found with one of Dumas' two most famous novels are numerous and if committed today, the author would likely receive the same sort of scorn reserved for the likes of Dan Brown or Terry Goodkind for their stylistically maladroit prose and their cardboard-thick, rough characterizations. Yet The Count of Monte Cristo is one of the more well-known and beloved novels that date from the mid-19th century? How is it that a novel so full of technical errors and plot devices that would irritate so many "modern" readers today be so popular?
I have read this story in three distinct phases. I first read it the summer before my senior year of high school, as part of my required summer reading list for honors English. That time, I read it in the abridged Bantam Classics edition. About six years later, during the summer of 1997, when I had little to do except work on my MA independent studies, I found an unabridged edition and read it then. Finally, I acquired a two-volume paperback edition in French and read it over the past three weeks. During each of those reads, my relationship with the novel changed.
I recall being engrossed with the novel back in the summer of 1991. I found the melodramatic parts (the escape from the dreaded Chateau d'If, Haydèe's denouncement of Morcerf) to be thrilling. Edmond/the Count's revenge just seemed so cold, so calculated, so designed to catch my teenage self's attention. The ending was particularly well-done, I recall thinking back then. But by the time that I read it in its full form in the summer of 1997, my opinion had shifted. Dumas seemed to take forever to get to a point (should note here that I had read virtually all of Dickens' work around the same time and was beginning to grow weary of mid-19th century serial narratives) and instead of Edmond's revenge being an engrossing matter, the entire matter had become so tedious, as dozens of chapters on the Count's various personae being developed and employed served to weaken the impact of the narrative. While I can imagine contemporary audiences, reading perhaps 25-50 pages per installment over the 1844-1846 period that the novel was serialized, might have found this elaborate setup to balance well between expository advancement and anticipatory foreshadowing, it would appear that for several readers who do not care for several of the tropes of these 19th century serials, The Count of Monte Cristo would serve as an exemplary model of how not to construct a novel.
When I read it in French a few weeks ago, my earlier sense of tedium returned even more. Seeing that the redundant dialogues and laborious character interactions were not the fault of the translator but instead that of Dumas, I began to question why this work ever managed to maintain its appeal through time, cultures, and languages. Then a thought occurred to me. Eco, in his essay on this novel, goes on to note that despite or perhaps even because of its numerous faults, The Count of Monte Cristo is so popular today because its plot, the exquisite revenge of the betrayed upon his betrayers, has an appeal that transcends the very text of the novel. For readers wanting to read a tale of revenge, The Count of Monte Cristo is akin to pornography for them. Taking Eco's definition of pornography, as found in his collection of essays, How to Travel with a Salmon, as being the detailing of all activity, no matter how tedious or mind-numbing that it might be, in order to create a simulacrum of time transpiring before the payoff, The Count of Monte Cristo would certainly qualify as such. The reader is witness to the entire unfolding of Edmond's revenge, from his escape and discovery of who had betrayed him, down to the final encounter in the catacombs outside Rome.
Here, the repetitive scenes, the piling upon of adjective after adjective, bon mot after bon mot, have served to create such a ponderous approximation of real-life (in a fashion similar to modern-day soap operas and their years-spanning plot lines) that the reader is ready to see the literary money shot. They may by now be able to guess at the main thrust of the dialogue in a fashion similar to how a midnight audience will "participate" in a screening of The Rocky Horror Picture Show, they may groan at the melodramatic speech, but in most cases, after a thousand-plus pages of buildup, the reader will have something invested in this story, something that transcends how the written story is constructed and which seems to touch upon oft-suppressed primal emotions. It is this emotional connection, which occurs largely outside the confines of the story/text, that appears to be the main reason why The Count of Monte Cristo has been a perennial favorite for over 160 years. It certainly is not because of the scintillating prose, sparkling dialogue, or adroit characterizations. If it weren't for the universal appeal of a revenge plot outlined in near-pornographic detail, it is hard to imagine this novel having a higher reputation than Bulwer-Lytton's have enjoyed in the past two generations.
Umberto Eco a raison de le dire, Le Comte de Monte-Cristo est un grand roman mal écrit: "Monte-Cristo part en tous sens. Débordant de redondances, répétant éhontément un adjectif à une ligne d'écart, accumulant avec incontinence ces mêmes adjectifs, ouvrant de sententieuses digressions sans réussir à les fermer car la syntaxe ne suit pas, avançant ainsi en haletant par périodes de vingt lignes, le roman est mécanique et gauche dans la description des sentiments."
In this quote from a recent French edition of 19th century French author Alexandre Dumas' 1844 novel, Le Comte de Monte-Cristo, Umberto Eco (in French translation, since he originally wrote it in Italian for another publication) lays bare a problem that several readers in the early 21st century might have with parsing 19th century novels. Eco notes that this novel is "a great novel badly written." It is full of repetitive motifs, the adjectives are piled on thicker than gravy on a country steak, there are digressions after digressions, and if twenty words could suffice instead of merely one, Dumas would utilize those twenty words...and likely a few others. In short, the list of faults that can be found with one of Dumas' two most famous novels are numerous and if committed today, the author would likely receive the same sort of scorn reserved for the likes of Dan Brown or Terry Goodkind for their stylistically maladroit prose and their cardboard-thick, rough characterizations. Yet The Count of Monte Cristo is one of the more well-known and beloved novels that date from the mid-19th century? How is it that a novel so full of technical errors and plot devices that would irritate so many "modern" readers today be so popular?
I have read this story in three distinct phases. I first read it the summer before my senior year of high school, as part of my required summer reading list for honors English. That time, I read it in the abridged Bantam Classics edition. About six years later, during the summer of 1997, when I had little to do except work on my MA independent studies, I found an unabridged edition and read it then. Finally, I acquired a two-volume paperback edition in French and read it over the past three weeks. During each of those reads, my relationship with the novel changed.
I recall being engrossed with the novel back in the summer of 1991. I found the melodramatic parts (the escape from the dreaded Chateau d'If, Haydèe's denouncement of Morcerf) to be thrilling. Edmond/the Count's revenge just seemed so cold, so calculated, so designed to catch my teenage self's attention. The ending was particularly well-done, I recall thinking back then. But by the time that I read it in its full form in the summer of 1997, my opinion had shifted. Dumas seemed to take forever to get to a point (should note here that I had read virtually all of Dickens' work around the same time and was beginning to grow weary of mid-19th century serial narratives) and instead of Edmond's revenge being an engrossing matter, the entire matter had become so tedious, as dozens of chapters on the Count's various personae being developed and employed served to weaken the impact of the narrative. While I can imagine contemporary audiences, reading perhaps 25-50 pages per installment over the 1844-1846 period that the novel was serialized, might have found this elaborate setup to balance well between expository advancement and anticipatory foreshadowing, it would appear that for several readers who do not care for several of the tropes of these 19th century serials, The Count of Monte Cristo would serve as an exemplary model of how not to construct a novel.
When I read it in French a few weeks ago, my earlier sense of tedium returned even more. Seeing that the redundant dialogues and laborious character interactions were not the fault of the translator but instead that of Dumas, I began to question why this work ever managed to maintain its appeal through time, cultures, and languages. Then a thought occurred to me. Eco, in his essay on this novel, goes on to note that despite or perhaps even because of its numerous faults, The Count of Monte Cristo is so popular today because its plot, the exquisite revenge of the betrayed upon his betrayers, has an appeal that transcends the very text of the novel. For readers wanting to read a tale of revenge, The Count of Monte Cristo is akin to pornography for them. Taking Eco's definition of pornography, as found in his collection of essays, How to Travel with a Salmon, as being the detailing of all activity, no matter how tedious or mind-numbing that it might be, in order to create a simulacrum of time transpiring before the payoff, The Count of Monte Cristo would certainly qualify as such. The reader is witness to the entire unfolding of Edmond's revenge, from his escape and discovery of who had betrayed him, down to the final encounter in the catacombs outside Rome.
Here, the repetitive scenes, the piling upon of adjective after adjective, bon mot after bon mot, have served to create such a ponderous approximation of real-life (in a fashion similar to modern-day soap operas and their years-spanning plot lines) that the reader is ready to see the literary money shot. They may by now be able to guess at the main thrust of the dialogue in a fashion similar to how a midnight audience will "participate" in a screening of The Rocky Horror Picture Show, they may groan at the melodramatic speech, but in most cases, after a thousand-plus pages of buildup, the reader will have something invested in this story, something that transcends how the written story is constructed and which seems to touch upon oft-suppressed primal emotions. It is this emotional connection, which occurs largely outside the confines of the story/text, that appears to be the main reason why The Count of Monte Cristo has been a perennial favorite for over 160 years. It certainly is not because of the scintillating prose, sparkling dialogue, or adroit characterizations. If it weren't for the universal appeal of a revenge plot outlined in near-pornographic detail, it is hard to imagine this novel having a higher reputation than Bulwer-Lytton's have enjoyed in the past two generations.
Illusions fall like the husk of a fruit, one after another, and the fruit is experience. - Narrator, Sylvie
Je suis méchant.
Je suis méchant.
The Count of Monte Cristo by Alexandre Dumas - Book Club now open!
- 25/01/2010 10:54:37 PM
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Les characters.
- 25/01/2010 10:56:23 PM
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Why does the book have enduring appeal?
- 25/01/2010 10:57:37 PM
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Or rather, does this book share any traits in common with pornography?
- 25/01/2010 11:14:01 PM
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I think the revenge plot is actually fairly weak.
- 26/01/2010 03:43:04 AM
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Re: I think the revenge plot is actually fairly weak.
- 26/01/2010 11:12:19 AM
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In that case, the "release" is quite unsatisfying.
- 27/01/2010 01:42:28 PM
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Which is precisely part of what makes the book interesting
- 27/01/2010 02:06:58 PM
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He would not have known the book would be ruined by water. He thought he was being buried.
- 27/01/2010 02:15:02 PM
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Oh, and your point on revenge - that's just reading too much into the text.
- 27/01/2010 02:16:05 PM
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There is no such thing
- 27/01/2010 02:18:46 PM
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I fundamentally disagree with your post-modern take on the novel.
- 27/01/2010 02:25:25 PM
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Re: Which is precisely part of what makes the book interesting
- 27/01/2010 03:40:36 PM
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Maybe it's of the same importance as the Lost Symbol.
- 27/01/2010 03:44:55 PM
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I think one important question to ask is...
- 26/01/2010 12:00:17 AM
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I like it, but it is purely on the adventure story level, and I've read the unabridged version.
- 26/01/2010 12:03:01 AM
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I'm fairly certain I read the unabridged version. It was 1500 pages. *NM*
- 26/01/2010 02:36:10 AM
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I have read the abridged version a couple of times. I am reading the unabridged version this time.
- 26/01/2010 03:25:50 AM
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I have read both
- 27/01/2010 01:37:00 AM
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I actually didn't mean the people here on the site so much as readers in general.
- 27/01/2010 01:44:46 AM
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Re: I actually didn't mean the people here on the site so much as readers in general.
- 27/01/2010 01:48:11 AM
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Re: I got here too late, so I offer Umberto Eco's thoughts on the matter:
- 22/02/2010 06:59:13 PM
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The book was very childish.
- 26/01/2010 03:05:01 AM
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Granted, The Master and Margarita is also very much a fantasy book. *NM*
- 26/01/2010 03:07:45 AM
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No, it really isn't.
- 26/01/2010 03:10:08 AM
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You know, this is a problem.
- 26/01/2010 03:43:14 AM
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Thank God, I've never even heard of "Skol". Popov, yes, but Skol?
- 26/01/2010 03:49:08 AM
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I've not tried it, but every time I go into liquor stores, it sits on the bottom shelf.
- 26/01/2010 03:57:03 AM
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There's really nothing I can say to this that Greg didn't just say above.
- 26/01/2010 06:32:02 AM
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Re: No, it really isn't.
- 26/01/2010 10:57:19 AM
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Having Camilla concur with me on literary matters is very encouraging.
- 26/01/2010 01:37:23 PM
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- 26/01/2010 01:37:23 PM
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I do not agree with your complete dismissal of The Count of Monte Cristo, though
- 26/01/2010 04:58:58 PM
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You make some rather odd claims here, Tom
- 27/01/2010 12:43:41 AM
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My claims are far from odd. In fact, they're quite common.
- 27/01/2010 01:57:41 AM
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In some circles; in others, they're rather antiquated nowadays
- 27/01/2010 02:21:03 AM
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If you were trying to write literature, wouldn't the label sting for you?
- 27/01/2010 01:25:14 PM
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I think it's easier to think of stories fitting into genre(s) than to think the same of authors
- 27/01/2010 02:40:29 PM
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Allow me to clarify: I'm talking about authors' reactions to their books being so labelled.
- 27/01/2010 03:08:47 PM
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But yet their reactions vary widely
- 27/01/2010 11:33:25 PM
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My fundamental premise is that genre has the most utility when applied to derivative fiction.
- 28/01/2010 09:39:17 PM
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And yet that term is mostly used as a non-loaded term that doesn't attempt to ascribe quality levels
- 29/01/2010 02:49:20 AM
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I like my definition of science fiction better than the one you quoted.
- 29/01/2010 05:16:36 AM
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I think estrangement is a key element, though
- 30/01/2010 11:00:19 PM
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I don't think estrangement is a necessary element.
- 30/01/2010 11:47:07 PM
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I mean it as a literary effect, that of creating a distance between text and reader
- 31/01/2010 12:03:34 AM
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Even if that's the meaning, I still disagree.
- 03/02/2010 12:49:58 AM
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Depends on how you view SF, I suppose
- 03/02/2010 04:20:56 AM
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I thought that was what we were mulling over
- 03/02/2010 04:38:35 AM
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Your unscientific anecdotal evidence sounds very odd to me.
- 28/01/2010 12:15:10 AM
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It might. I'm not purporting to speak for all of humanity (at least on this point).
- 28/01/2010 09:43:40 PM
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- 28/01/2010 09:43:40 PM
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So, what you're saying is that watching the 2002 movie was sufficient? Good!
*NM*
- 26/01/2010 06:34:53 AM
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*NM*
- 26/01/2010 06:34:53 AM
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I'm not through it quite yet, but I do have a question
- 26/01/2010 12:24:14 PM
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Wait...you VOTED for this book?
- 26/01/2010 01:41:00 PM
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I honestly can't remember.
- 26/01/2010 01:55:39 PM
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Doctor Zhivago is one of the best novels ever written.
- 26/01/2010 02:12:35 PM
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Right, so now we all know that if we'd just listen to me more often, the world would be better.
- 26/01/2010 02:20:56 PM
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The problem was that the suggestions were generally not that good.
- 26/01/2010 02:32:50 PM
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You really are ignornant of what A.S. Byatt writes, aren't you?
- 27/01/2010 12:51:00 AM
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- 27/01/2010 12:51:00 AM
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Oh, I fucking hate epistolary novels. Thank you for warning me.
- 27/01/2010 02:00:34 AM
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It's funny because I think it's a question of taste level.
- 26/01/2010 02:32:08 PM
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Curious George is a tale of many layers, as told by Werner Herzog
- 26/01/2010 02:34:27 PM
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On what basis?
- 26/01/2010 02:51:40 PM
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It's a children's book. Get over it. Democracy failed.
- 26/01/2010 02:55:03 PM
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Usually does, when those who know better keep silent.
- 26/01/2010 02:57:54 PM
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Regarding comfort zones
- 26/01/2010 05:08:50 PM
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Camilla, let's be honest here...
- 26/01/2010 05:40:08 PM
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Re: Camilla, let's be honest here...
- 26/01/2010 09:10:47 PM
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If that's your goal, Camilla, you failed.
- 27/01/2010 01:35:52 PM
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Possibly
- 27/01/2010 01:38:39 PM
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I have not been ranting and raving. I've been highly critical of the book, with much justification.
- 27/01/2010 01:45:05 PM
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Re: I've been highly critical of the book, with much justification.
- 27/01/2010 01:53:28 PM
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I was wondering how long it would take for you to blame me and Greg.
- 27/01/2010 02:26:12 PM
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Don't you get it? We bring this place down.
- 27/01/2010 02:42:32 PM
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Heh heh heh. Pink cardigan-wearing suburban cul-de-sac. I like it.
*NM*
- 27/01/2010 03:11:25 PM
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*NM*
- 27/01/2010 03:11:25 PM
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Re: I was wondering how long it would take for you to blame me and Greg.
- 27/01/2010 02:43:11 PM
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While that was not the intent, that is an added bonus.
- 27/01/2010 02:48:47 PM
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why is it a bonus?
- 27/01/2010 02:52:58 PM
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I said see above. You should have before the thought police, Rebekah, started to delete.
- 27/01/2010 02:59:07 PM
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Well, you wouldn't grow tired of us calling a novel shit if you chose a novel that wasn't shit.
- 27/01/2010 03:11:57 PM
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Re: Regarding comfort zones
- 27/01/2010 11:57:03 AM
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So. I really liked it.
- 26/01/2010 08:57:02 AM
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Yes, fearless leader, this is where I stand.
- 26/01/2010 11:04:23 PM
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Re: Yes, fearless leader, this is where I stand.
- 26/01/2010 11:49:03 PM
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We were talking about this last night.
- 27/01/2010 11:14:21 AM
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Re: We were talking about this last night.
- 27/01/2010 11:37:04 AM
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If you do that, I'm posting on the deeper meaning of Dan Brown.
- 27/01/2010 01:46:35 PM
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Feel free to.
- 27/01/2010 01:51:23 PM
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Your post-modern take on the novel is shit, shit, shit.
- 27/01/2010 02:28:56 PM
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Re: Your post-modern take on the novel is shit, shit, shit.
- 27/01/2010 02:45:41 PM
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I'm not setting up a straw man. I'm challenging your touchy-feely approach.
- 27/01/2010 03:15:00 PM
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My touchy-feely approach?
- 27/01/2010 05:09:04 PM
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Yes...using passing references in the text to justify a deeper analysis.
- 27/01/2010 05:16:10 PM
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Doesn't touchy-feely mean that it is steeped in or based on emotion?
- 27/01/2010 06:40:31 PM
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I think between the two of you I agree more with Tom here.
- 27/01/2010 07:01:08 PM
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Re: I think between the two of you I agree more with Tom here.
- 27/01/2010 08:29:32 PM
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See my reply to Tom for clarification, then.
- 27/01/2010 08:57:18 PM
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Re: See my reply to Tom for clarification, then.
- 27/01/2010 09:09:47 PM
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Er. Whose position are you arguing - mine or yours?
- 27/01/2010 10:33:01 PM
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- 27/01/2010 10:33:01 PM
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Mine. Which is more complicated than a simple rejection. That is what I am saying.
- 01/02/2010 12:53:58 PM
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Do it. I'd read that.
- 27/01/2010 01:55:23 PM
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All righty, that's enough of that. For Tom, Greg, and... no, pretty much just you two.
- 27/01/2010 04:33:00 PM
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I call bullshit. I have been conducting the debate in a measured fashion.
- 27/01/2010 04:50:35 PM
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And ANOTHER THING
- 27/01/2010 05:05:17 PM
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Not everyone has finished reading it yet *NM*
- 27/01/2010 05:12:10 PM
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Okay, so you'll get one or two stragglers in a week to a month. It changes nothing.
- 27/01/2010 05:17:51 PM
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Re: Okay, so you'll get one or two stragglers in a week to a month. It changes nothing.
- 27/01/2010 06:41:11 PM
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We are discussing this book. We're discussing its faults.
- 27/01/2010 07:30:49 PM
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In the interest of discussing Dumas' intentions...
- 27/01/2010 08:03:24 PM
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Re: We are discussing this book. We're discussing its faults.
- 27/01/2010 08:30:19 PM
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The text doesn't warrant "close attention" any more than Dan Brown's works do.
- 27/01/2010 09:10:45 PM
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Also, do you think a good book would have generated this level of discussion? Of course not.
- 27/01/2010 05:21:45 PM
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What discussion?
- 27/01/2010 06:42:32 PM
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I said that we couldn't discuss the book on its own terms.
- 27/01/2010 07:35:32 PM
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Which I still think we can.
- 27/01/2010 08:35:35 PM
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Perhaps you shouldn't be breaking things down at all.
- 27/01/2010 09:06:59 PM
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Re: Perhaps you shouldn't be breaking things down at all.
- 27/01/2010 09:12:22 PM
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I apologize if I'm part of the reason you feel ganged up on.
- 27/01/2010 10:40:36 PM
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Re: I apologize if I'm part of the reason you feel ganged up on.
- 01/02/2010 12:56:03 PM
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Deary me.
- 27/01/2010 05:19:58 PM
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By "respect" do you mean that you want me to drop my debates?
- 27/01/2010 05:24:03 PM
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Not at all.
- 27/01/2010 05:35:34 PM
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I'm sorry as well - if I had any kind of willpower, it wouldn't have gotten that far.
- 27/01/2010 06:29:43 PM
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On the nature of the "Book Club"
- 28/01/2010 09:23:23 PM
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Any chance of seeing some shorter suggestions?
- 28/01/2010 10:20:59 PM
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Yes, shorter would be good.
- 28/01/2010 10:23:28 PM
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Well, you should have known better!
- 29/01/2010 01:29:40 AM
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- 29/01/2010 01:29:40 AM
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All I can say is The Master and Margarita better be one by March. WE WAS ROBBED.
*NM*
- 29/01/2010 02:31:48 AM
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*NM*
- 29/01/2010 02:31:48 AM
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Well I'm late to the party
- 29/01/2010 06:21:18 AM
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No, you're early
- 01/02/2010 01:26:10 PM
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I still have yet to see that discussion, Camilla. *NM*
- 03/02/2010 12:46:24 AM
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Interesting way of dismissing what has already been discussed about the book
- 03/02/2010 04:22:26 AM
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Nah, there's been discussion, here and there inbetween the fighting.
*NM*
- 03/02/2010 04:39:24 PM
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- 03/02/2010 04:39:24 PM
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An interesting quote from the book - does it jibe with your experience?
- 29/01/2010 11:23:54 PM
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