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Okay, here you go. I am giving you the benefit of the doubt as to your sincerity. Tom Send a noteboard - 26/02/2011 03:20:44 PM
Lolita, light of my life, fire of my loins. My sin, my soul. Lo-lee-ta: the tip of the tongue taking a trip of three steps down the palate to tap, at three, on the teeth. Lo. Lee. Ta.

She was Lo, plain Lo, in the morning, standing four feet ten in one sock. She was Lola in slacks. She was Dolly at school. She was Dolores on the dotted line. But in my arms she was always Lolita.


Without needing to spell things out in black and white, Nabokov has told us almost everything we need to know coming into the story. The author is obsessed with a girl - so obsessed that even the sound of her name fascinates him. We know she's young because of the height and the "at school" description. We know she's with him because of the "in the morning...in one sock" and "in my arms" comments.

The sense of urgency is clear because the first two bits are sentence fragments conveying intense desire and emotion. This is followed by a long sentence, obsessive in quality, that describes very well the way the name is said. "A trip of three steps down the palate" is not usually how people describe pronunciation. That's very clever imagery.

The different nicknames show different sides of the same girl - in the morning, after his lust had been sated, he calls her "Lo" in a casual, familiar way, but without the same burning desire. "...standing four feet ten in one sock" is a great descriptive phrase - it doesn't go on and on but it gives you enough information to make a vivid mental image nonetheless.

Once she's dressed in the morning, she's "Lola" - a sense of formality has descended. Her friends called her Dolly but not the author. He notes she was officially "Dolores", in case anyone thought her name was something else, but not by saying "Her real name was Dolores", which would be a bit crude, but by saying "She was Dolores on the dotted line". Again, it's a compact sentence but it conveys the image of her signing something, it's a bit more vivid and fresh than a simple affirmation and it is unambiguous.

Finally, we are brought back to the initial sentence fragments and reminded that this girl is in a relationship that by most measures is completely inappropriate for a girl "four feet ten" and "in school". She is Lolita in the heat of passion.

Note that here, as elsewhere, the author does not provide any pornographic descriptions. We know what is happening without needing to know details - "in my arms" is a good way to be clear enough without the details.

That's my explanation of the exact words that I cut from Lolita. The words are carefully chosen and well used, the sentences flow and the imagery is vivid. We have learned volumes with a few carefully-chosen sentences.
Political correctness is the pettiest form of casuistry.

ἡ δὲ κἀκ τριῶν τρυπημάτων ἐργαζομένη ἐνεκάλει τῇ φύσει, δυσφορουμένη, ὅτι δὴ μὴ καὶ τοὺς τιτθοὺς αὐτῇ εὐρύτερον ἢ νῦν εἰσι τρυπώη, ὅπως καὶ ἄλλην ἐνταῦθα μίξιν ἐπιτεχνᾶσθαι δυνατὴ εἴη. – Procopius

Ummaka qinnassa nīk!

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Can someone explain to me how Jordan is not a particularly good writer? - 21/02/2011 05:41:31 PM 3408 Views
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Thank you. - 21/02/2011 11:43:08 PM 1501 Views
Well Said! - 22/02/2011 02:42:22 PM 1461 Views
I can take a shot at that, since nobody else seems willing to. - 22/02/2011 07:29:20 AM 1836 Views
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Amen *NM* - 22/02/2011 04:32:50 PM 858 Views
Re: Can someone explain to me how Jordan is not a particularly good writer? - 22/02/2011 06:27:11 PM 2254 Views
Brain overload! This is really well thought out. - 23/02/2011 10:22:37 PM 1437 Views
thank you for the insight into the outside view lol - 24/02/2011 04:34:57 PM 1451 Views
I think DomA answered the question best, but the "do you like it" argument is weak. - 22/02/2011 10:32:51 PM 1673 Views
Re: I think DomA answered the question best, but the "do you like it" argument is weak. - 22/02/2011 11:16:24 PM 1594 Views
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Re: If the core of the story is all that matters, why read a book - 24/02/2011 11:23:42 PM 1266 Views
So wait, style is good? - 25/02/2011 12:32:07 AM 1629 Views
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I'm not trolling - 25/02/2011 11:57:18 PM 1264 Views
That depends... - 23/02/2011 03:00:35 AM 1535 Views
the "do you like it" is the most important criterion - 23/02/2011 10:45:17 PM 1381 Views
Re: the "do you like it" is the most important criterion - 24/02/2011 01:53:59 AM 1363 Views
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Not for quality of writing. - 24/02/2011 05:17:52 PM 1336 Views
Those who can do, the rest are critics. *NM* - 24/02/2011 07:55:50 PM 856 Views
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I still don't get it. - 24/02/2011 08:27:50 AM 1217 Views
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I'm sure you have a wonderful job awaiting in fast food service. - 25/02/2011 01:57:15 AM 1405 Views
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Jack @$$ snobbery at its best. WOW *NM* - 28/02/2011 05:48:43 PM 863 Views
... - 25/02/2011 01:07:22 AM 1247 Views
Maybe you should have used better prose? - 25/02/2011 01:23:17 AM 1115 Views
It is not a serious question. - 25/02/2011 01:53:59 AM 1292 Views
How so? - 25/02/2011 02:59:05 AM 1401 Views
I have every right to use that tone. - 25/02/2011 03:08:14 PM 1340 Views
Is that so? - 25/02/2011 05:58:31 AM 1401 Views
I'm not fixated with Jordan. - 25/02/2011 03:13:56 PM 1346 Views
Then why do you keep trying to qualify the passage in relation to him? - 25/02/2011 06:29:31 PM 1394 Views
You're conflating two things. - 25/02/2011 07:32:59 PM 1422 Views
All right, now we're getting somewhere. - 26/02/2011 12:40:57 AM 1325 Views
you raise very good questions... *NM* - 26/02/2011 09:21:13 AM 789 Views
Okay, here you go. I am giving you the benefit of the doubt as to your sincerity. - 26/02/2011 03:20:44 PM 1149 Views
Thank you, and I agree with all your explanations. *NM* - 26/02/2011 07:28:09 PM 791 Views
Glad to hear that. - 27/02/2011 03:42:33 AM 1220 Views
No problem, these things happen on the internet. *NM* - 27/02/2011 04:36:57 AM 837 Views
No, it is a serious question, just one that can never be seriously answered. - 25/02/2011 03:28:48 PM 1302 Views
Your opinion isn't as valid as anyone else's if that's your opinion. - 25/02/2011 04:44:57 PM 1453 Views
Jack @$$ snobbery at its best. WOW *NM* - 28/02/2011 05:51:48 PM 711 Views
double post. oh my! *NM* - 28/02/2011 05:52:17 PM 738 Views
Just makes you right twice *NM* - 28/02/2011 09:42:19 PM 846 Views
Re: ... - 25/02/2011 08:59:37 AM 1295 Views
And part 2, on the analysis of writing. - 24/02/2011 01:16:20 AM 1345 Views
Florid desciption is usually not a good thing. - 24/02/2011 05:30:30 PM 1281 Views
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Re: Why do you think mind-expanding literature is restricted to the classics? - 23/02/2011 09:25:10 AM 1439 Views
Of course people read for pleasure. - 23/02/2011 09:04:24 PM 1242 Views
Ok... - 24/02/2011 08:59:27 AM 1251 Views
"Yeah well, that's, like, just your opinion, man." Good argument. - 24/02/2011 03:43:24 PM 1341 Views
*NM* - 24/02/2011 05:37:02 PM 758 Views
I find your above average tastes and intelligence uninspiring. - 24/02/2011 08:42:03 PM 1192 Views
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Among living writers? - 24/02/2011 08:16:08 PM 1391 Views
No Rushdie? - 24/02/2011 09:22:46 PM 1258 Views
I was considering mentioning Rushdie. - 24/02/2011 09:32:20 PM 1225 Views
My list would be similar... - 26/02/2011 07:24:11 AM 1490 Views
That was a very good list. - 26/02/2011 03:07:31 PM 1383 Views
Re: That was a very good list. - 27/02/2011 04:51:43 AM 1405 Views
Once I finish Hugo I'm probably going to read Druon. - 27/02/2011 02:30:03 PM 1218 Views
Oh, and another question - 27/02/2011 05:28:47 PM 1144 Views
Re: Oh, and another question - 01/03/2011 03:42:02 AM 1347 Views
One final question, if you'll indulge me... - 01/03/2011 06:43:23 PM 1192 Views
Well, until I have time to return to your previous post but... - 01/03/2011 07:45:13 PM 1397 Views
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Re: I think the two of you have taken too narrow a meaning of 'great' - 28/02/2011 11:51:49 PM 1445 Views
Re: I think the two of you have taken too narrow a meaning of 'great' - 03/03/2011 12:01:30 AM 1449 Views
Link to DomA Post from up above: - 03/03/2011 12:20:11 AM 1582 Views
He's a great storyteller, but his prose is somewhat uninspiring. *NM* - 27/02/2011 07:28:00 PM 871 Views

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